I reallllly want to know what happens next! Please update!!!
I really like the idea you have for this story! Good luck with your first fanfic!
It's really good so far. Just a few grammar mistakes.
i really like how there's a mystery about why both naraku and inuyasha's scents are on her, especially when sessy finds her knocked out all scratch up. can't wait for u to write another one, bye :3
WONDERFUL STORY MORE UPDATES!
It's starting out ok. But please use a spellchecker?
Waiting to see what you will come up with in the next chapter.
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