I'm dying to know since he kept saying that her smell & he then mentioned a few delightful smells he couldn't resist & added that the smell of her purity was like the icing on the cake ,so was he her first, I mean was she a virgin before their first time because you wrote it as if he just impaled her without foreplay once he found out that she had been trying to entice him because she wanted him but you left it at him finally snapping, stripping himself while she watched in awe,then he stripped her & told her that she had played with fire & was now going to be put in her place & to his shock she said 'about time' then realizing he the predator was actually the prey....he saw she was wet & went in.....end. no real details or info. next chap was 2 wks later & they were having sex daily or often & he was shocked that he couldn't get enough & look from her kept him with a constant erection. next chap...loss of control. next chap...letting her top or play alpha....he says she is insatiable & more willing then any other & he can't stop.Now I ask... is he going to mate her???
LunaGirl (Chapter 8) - Thu 06 Jan 2011
Oh wow! That was . . . Steamy Hot! You have a way to describe things that just makes you picture everything so perfectly! It was funny bcse my boyfriend came into the room while I was reading and he asked me if I was ok, he said that I was breathing relly deep! LOL! I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!
amy (Chapter 8) - Thu 06 Jan 2011
IS HE SURE IT WAS WORTH LOSING CONTROL? SOUNDS LIKE IT WAS!MORE UPDATES!
Oh you have done it again, this was utterly delightful indeed. I feel faint from reading this sparkling little piece. So succinct, sensual, succulent and superbly sexy!! I am left wishing and wanting to be Kagome once again. And to read at the end there are more of these lemony delights to come? Ah yes please, start as soon as you like,lol. Thankyou once again.
Kanna37 (Chapter 8) - Thu 06 Jan 2011
Maybe next I should call ahead and schedule an appointment with the ambulance BEFORE I read one of these... that way, when I start having my heart attack, they are already on site.
Amber
that was hot! I hope to see you for GMDDN! I might even allow up to 500 words s you can continue these drabbles! I'll have to ask that night and see if people like the idea of 500 words!
This was elegant and intensely erotic, every carefully placed word reverberating with sensuality. I loved this as I do everything you write. You go from strength to strength. I look forward very much to the next instalment. Thanks so much.
omfg hahahaha i love that! Go Kagome! >:3 poor big dai never stood a chance!
amy (Chapter 7) - Fri 31 Dec 2010
GREAT JOB<MORE UPDATES!
lara (Chapter 6) - Thu 30 Dec 2010
that one did have a couple of weapon references but do they do much damage???
amy (Chapter 6) - Tue 28 Dec 2010
FANTASTIC !
Yet again this was wonderful. The repartee between the pair of them flew thick and fast, crisp and sharp. Excellent. There is a fine line it seems between battle and seduction. I loved this. It was witty, sensual and thoroughly entertaining. I wish Sesshoumaru would make promises like that to me. Sigh. Great addition to your little set of lovely words.
It wasn't nearly as corny as some I've read! Any eavesdroppers would think he was threatening her with a bodily harm and not carnal acts ;)
Ah, YES! This most recent tidbit added just the right "spice" to my holiday reading, references to male anatomy notwithstanding! Simply delicious, m'dear!!
;D
~~Wiccan~~
Kanna37 (Chapter 6) - Tue 28 Dec 2010
LOL! The thought of a permanently aroused Sesshoumaru... wow.
Amber
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