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Tsuki (Chapter 5) - Thu 18 Nov 2010

Muhaha I loved that chapter! I can't wait for more :D


Kanna37 (Chapter 5) - Thu 18 Nov 2010

AHHHHCk!  You tease!  Now I'm the frustrated one....

Amber


sousie (Chapter 4) - Wed 17 Nov 2010

at this rate he will be the first demon to die from sexual frustration


lara (Chapter 4) - Tue 16 Nov 2010

yes but will he get it from her is the question??


Christine (Chapter 3) - Mon 15 Nov 2010

Once again I found this to be very beautiful and thoroughly engaging. I really admire your skills in using descriptive language that appears so simple yet paints such a wonderful picture. I could really see Kagome sitting there, skin glowing in the soft light from the fire. No wonder Sesshoumaru was so thoroughly enchanted by her legs, oh you made her sound so so lovely.

I like that little teasing moment when after having reprimanded InuYasha, Kagome's beautiful blue eyes just meet for a second with Sesshoumaru's. That little flicker between them really springs to life with the subtle way you described it. I finish this chapter feeling very satisfied as always. Long may your muse grace you, your words enchant.


Kanna37 (Chapter 4) - Sun 14 Nov 2010

And I can't wait, either.  Long live the next chapter!  ~giggles~

Amber


Aimee Simmons (Chapter 4) - Sun 14 Nov 2010

hehehehe...  I find that I am really enjoying this one.

 


1CarinoInu (Chapter 4) - Sun 14 Nov 2010

Shame on her...teasing that gorgeous demon, leaving him so frustrated.....here, let me help him out LOL!


FayeMegan (Chapter 4) - Sun 14 Nov 2010

>:3 buwahahaha. Go Kagome~


Kanna37 (Chapter 3) - Wed 10 Nov 2010

oOoOo... sweet, and tantalizing, too.  Looking forward to the next, while looking back with enjoyment!

Amber


lara (Chapter 2) - Fri 05 Nov 2010

I am really enjoying this & only wish that it was not a drabble collection but a story instead. 

I personally would love to see these two suffering the same way seperately in there in own camps (or in his place at camp & his palace), until one or the other discovered by accident .....either by finding & hearing what one said about the other while alone in a hot spring either trying to get relief a little to loud  (by calling the other one's name aloud) thinking themselves alone  ...or for she (Kagome crying aloud to herself- the knowledge that wanting him & knowing that by his own words..she is less than dirt trying to consider herselfy could

 I would love to see it as a story that showed what & how both were suffering &/or experiencing from their own points of view. It could also be good to see how it continued once they found they were both actually suffering the same in the same way about each other & if they could consider facing each other & even  speaking to each other  after discovering,confronting & acknowledging their situation. They could then try to figure out together what they'd be willing to do to stop the  ....would they try to  get together only once (even though it would entail her giving her virginity to him with his knowledge & honor knowing she would be willingly giving him something she could never give away again) see if they could rid each other of their craving


~Juggalette4Lyfe420~ (Chapter 2) - Fri 05 Nov 2010

Just for that HOT SMEXY Chapter I FORGIVE u hehe :P update again soon tho PLEASE


Christine (Chapter 2) - Wed 03 Nov 2010

With phrases like these no wonder Sesshoumaru is losing sleep:

"...ripe human flesh..."

"...soft curls..."

"...supple flesh of her belly..."

"...her succulent body dragging him from the depths of sleep with jarring force..."

 

Your powers of description are beyond wonderful. I love your writing, it is vivd and alive, every detail springs to life as my eyes take in each line. I very much admire your consistent quality too, everything I have read by you so far has captured my imagination to the fullest. I do thank you for such lovely  entertainment.


Kanna37 (Chapter 2) - Wed 03 Nov 2010

Can't wait to see more - you torture the daiyoukai so well!

Amber

 


Christine (Chapter 1) - Fri 08 Oct 2010

I liked this very much. Your powers of description are just lovely. I can feel Sesshoumaru's fascination as you describe so well the beaty of Kagome. Your words are crisp and clean and precise and give the loveliest mind pictures. I so admire the things you write. I have loved your previous little set of drabbles about the many and varied scents of Kagome and I think I will love this just as much. You never fail to delight.Thankyou so much.


m. (Chapter 1) - Thu 07 Oct 2010

this isa great beginning. =] i can't wait to see what you have in store for this peeping tom and miss delicate charm, esp when she has a temper. please update soon. looking forward to it


Tsuki (Chapter 1) - Thu 07 Oct 2010

Muhaha :) I really, really liked that!

 Your first chapter is off to a great start. I can't wait for more. Keep up the awesome work! :D


Kanna37 (Chapter 1) - Thu 07 Oct 2010

Can't wait... this one was good on its own and if they get better...

Amber


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