This one-shot was so light-hearted, cute and funny. I loved Shiro’s character. Wish my father was like him in more ways then just the horrid cooking. :P I know I say it ALL the time but I really can’t get over your knack for detail. It’s like having the perfect cup of tea each and every time I read something of yours. It’s always just the perfect amount of detail to draw me in, but never to drawn me like some other detailed pieces I’ve read. And I must say, I believe I’ve found a new love in your one-shots! :P

This was amazing. Very subtle and very sweet. Adored it.

Hehe very cute :).

Awwww~ this was absolutely FANTASTIC!!!! <3 I adored this lovely story of yours, m'dear!! The vivid descriptions really helped to put the readers in the right mood for lighthearted flirty attraction, and I adored how you brought in characters like Shiro and Inuyasha and gave it a very warm familial touch :) I loved the watermelon fight too. Wonderful, just wonderful! Great job! The only thing I can think of complaining about is...why is this a oneshot??? (T.T) LOL. There's so much potential! You do fluff so well~