Very entertaining and cute story. You may befefit from working on a word processor to catch and correct the numerous spelling, punctuation, and grammer errors which are detracting from it. Or. perhaps. a beta reader could clean it up for you.
Cute story~
I always read <3 as a heart, however. See? sideways heart C:
I'm thinking there's a glitch, since all I'm seeing is 'The.' You must fix it sounds like a really good story!!!
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