What a twist! the drama unfolds! A mighty web you weave, and I mean this very seriosuly, I belive I'm hooked.
The change in InuYasha while not totally drastic is surprising! I'm wondering what exactly is feeding him into these dark thoughts, I also wonder if Sesshomaru can find a loophole with the council. The irony of InuYasha's last statement is not lost on me and I'm on the edge of my seat heading to the next chapter!
Lovely build up! my heart hurts, it fears what may happen between her and InuYasha
I was a bit unsure with the first chapter to be honest, but you'e wrapped me in so deep and captured me in the story you're weaving! Really great stuff so far!!
I hope this review finds you and your mother in good health and good spirits.
-KD
Deana (Chapter 7) - Sat 28 Apr 2012
Excellent stury. Hope all is well with your mom and that you continue this intreging story.
OMG PLEASE!!!! You have to continue this one!!!!! It is very good...*rolls on the floor and begs*
I love your story. I think the plot is unique and the way you carried it out is also great. I look forward to reading more.
Meara (Chapter 7) - Sun 13 Mar 2011
Thank you for the update, but you must know that we completely understand if you decide not to do so again so soon. My thoughts are with you during these trying times and I wish both you and your family well.
toni (Chapter 7) - Fri 11 Mar 2011
Oh! Good story and Im sorry about her mom's news. I'll pray for you
oh saffie i'm sorry for your momma!
as to the chapter, i really do hope they get inuyasha, has kagome taken off his collar yet? if not maybe she could sit him to oblivian. :3 btw i hope Tetsaiga has rejected him at this point!
okay * i hope inuyasha AND Ku die a violent bloody death >:l inupapa should come back from the grave just to bring inuyasha down with him. or kikyo! she could be a good guy taking them back with her!
seriously i hope inuyasha dies a painfulyl bloody death
oh my! *le blush* i hope they hang yusha!
0o0o0o0o0o!!!
So i alwasy find your fics right bfore i have to do something, like leaving and now i'm all O_O b/c i hafta got o classes
I am sorry to hear of your mother's illness. I wish you peace, and offer hugs.
We understand that real life comes first.
I will keep you and your family in my prayers.
I am sorry to read of your mother. I think I can speak for many here when I say that we totally understand. Be with your family at this time.
Your story is full of wonderful twists. I am looking forward to more.
Yay awesome updates! Keep up the good work!!
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