Nice finish. I know if I'd been the one to fall down a well only to find it was a rift in time... I'd sure as sugar write a novel or two about it. So, good conclusion to a nice little collection. I did notice one booboo last chapter. Kagome is telling him of how she's waited or him 'praying time would not take you from'. I assume you meant to sneak another me in the at the end. Just wanted to point it out.
Much love, and thanks for the read.
It's going beautifully so far, so good job with the storyline and tying in all of the the prompts so efficiently.I would have reviewed sooner, but with drabbles I tend to fly through a handful of chapters before realizing how far I've come.
Onward!
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