I am still in love with this style you're using for this. Beautiful.

I would like to know what type of world they are in! This is going very nicely so excited for the next chapter.

kagome has brown eyes... luv the story :meow:

Wooo hooo :)

Keep it going!!!!

I think you did well making that a shorter chapter, it did help capture the passion and the mood. Very well done! Keep up the good work :D

hohoho! This is getting good! Sesshoumaru 1: Inuyasha 0. Hehehe. I love it!

hhahahahha yes indeed, I don't think Kagome would obey him at all, "heroine"? I don't think as Kagome as that, LOL hehehhe, indeed the fangirls would obey!!! him, and his every word.

Great Story!!!!!

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Megan007

I was so excited to see another chapter I chased the kids out of the house, I needed the quiet to enjoy this chapter.  I'm so amazed the way you write.  Within the first few lines I feel as if I'm a shadow watching it all, feel as if I can feel their powers beating for one another, feel the passion he has for her and now the surprise she has for him.   I will be waiting on pins and needles till the next chapter is out, drabble or real chapter your words flowed like water.

Oh wow! I love it! Pleaseee update soon ^_^

the first chapter took my breath away. The writing is so descriptive and beautifully written. Well done; can't wait to read more!

I absolutly love it, make it a chapter story; the story sounds  very intriguing it would be a waste to leave it as is. I hope to read more. =)

Oh! please don't leave this as a oneshot! I love it too much! The plot was just starting you can do so much! (obivously you can tell that I love this story!)

I found it fascinating. It manages to stand alone, but there's also room for continuation if you decide to grant us your readers a chance to see how Sesshoumaru courts Kagome.  Be interesting to get back story too.

There'd be some interesting tension between the 4-some down the road.  I don't know if I should write it here :)

Awesome chapter.

continue it and update soon

MORE UPDATES PLEEEEEASE!

....................... 8D that was pretty amazing!!!!!! please continue to write it! not just a one shot......

this is a  really good story.  the concept  is new  and fresh.  i would love to see more.  sorry avout the odd words after this.   i posted this  response on my phone.  this isba  ii

Yes, yes, YES - the reader finds it most interesting! :)

Beatiful but also a very painful beginning - I can only sympathise with  Kagome.

Please, do continue.

Awesome story!! You must continue it! I love the plot and the possessiveness that Seshomaru is showing. ^.^ Keep it up!! 

It's a really promising story! I hope you won't keep it in an oneshot.

Hope to read more. ^^