I loved this story when I read it on A Single Spark, and I am so happy to get to read the end! The entire story was beautiful, imaginative, and well-written. Thank you so much for sharing it with me:)
My favorite parts, for posterity's sake, were when Kagome greeted Sesshoumaru like an Inu, when Kagome took on the Seer demons for Sesshoumaru (and I thought that the sealing tattoos were an excellent creative touch), and when Sesshoumaru tells the Inu-tachi that the person approaching is his mate - in that matter-of-fact way. It was great.
The last chapters 9 & 10 were very confusing for me & I don't understand. After everything that Kagome had to suffer.. lifetimes of losing her loved ones ..........before she fell down the well she'd suffered more than any human ,having part of her soul taken,been hunted for being the jewels miko,every friend she had ,tried to kill her once at first.......so she suffered, centuries of suffering after falling into the past & falling in love with Sessh & then suffered with him at losing his family which was hers too,she suffered so many human lifetimes without her own mate who left her to do what he had to do,before they mated she gave her life for him & after his mother died even though she was suffering too,he ignored her suffering & to save him she risked her life to take in his demons only to have to then suffer his anger,never seeing it for the fact that as he lost his mom she was also suffering because his mom was hers too & then how could he ask her to watch him die & lose her mom & mate..did he ever realize his selfishness & the depth of her love she proved in that act?
...............I wish you'd have given us more details .......because the way you skipped around ........there are so many unanswered questions........after all the lifetimes & centuries she'd suffered..why couldn't the fates & Kamis have give her something for causing her so much suffering & then sending her farther in the past only to have to still return to her time & finish her original painful destiny....& it's as if they took so much from her, as if they were testing her & she was given no award for all she'd done..she gave,gave,gave & even though she never asked..would it have been wrong if they'd gifted her in the end...even if it was to make her an miko/inu youkai she & Sessh could have had a full complete bond & with full youkai pupsshe would not have to forever worry that she & they would have to suffer the worry of losing themselves to their youkai blood,being hunted for being hanyou,being mistreated because of their birth............she asked for nothing,deserved so very much & yet was gifted with nothing......in my eyes in this story,the Kami's /fates used & abused her
If Kagome was his Mate why did he keep her a secret ??he could have always said he was betrothed or Mated without giving her name & saying he had to protect her identity until the time was right & that way,he could have allowed her the piece of mind that she was still the only female for him & it would keep any female from approaching him...& since they really weren't mated by with their souls.& he was always so willing to abandon her for years at a time, he had her in a place where she was far & hidden...he wasn't a fool & had to knew he was hurting her,right??...maybe to keep her from the Kagome that hadn't yet been thru the well into his childhood, the one that didn't have the same past shared with Sessh but...she was stuck alone in a foreign land ........if I was her I would've felt insecure knowing we didn't have the Mate bond we were supposed to have.......he had all these senses that would always know if she lied or cheated,although he know she never would..but his behavior & anger & eagerness to leave her & his words stating his distrust of her because in his way of thinking for whatever reason, other than to hurt her, which makes no sense.,why??..since he knew she was innocent in everyway & that he was the 1st & only man she had kissed or touched ever & yet he came to her with such anger,not willing to touch her ,kiss her or anything...even though he knew in truth that he, Sessh, was the only man she'd ever known & loved in always...yet because he saw Inuyasha he threw it in her face that 500-800 yrs ago as a mere kid with a crush on her friend & protector ,until the day she was dropped into his childhood,suddenly seperated from her family & friends, after only being seperated from the only people she ever knew she'd had a nightmare fearing what had happened when she'd dissappeared..had all her friends been killed..so she woke calling Inuyasha's name.one time...even though Sessh knew there had never been anything between her & Inuyasha ever...just because he saw him .Sessh thru that in her face & it was as if he said the words just to hurt & scare her ??.........if I was her & Sessh had avoided me for so many,many years as if he was punishing her & keeping her far away ,not telling anyone ever he had a Mate or betrothed & since she didn't have the sense of smell that would tell her if he'd cheated on her,broke his oath to her.....he tortured her by avoiding her & filling her with insecurities..how could he treat her like that when he really knew the truth,knew how sensitive she was & knew he was the only man she ever loved,touched & he knew he was the only one to ever touch her..knowing her so well ,why did he cause her such pain???
& the last 2 chapters the kids, the names ??? it seems Sessh mated her & they had a hanyou daughter but ..but how /when..she still had to finish the jewel...fight for her life...9 & 10 held no details at all & left the story finished with so many questions
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! i can't believe this story finally has an ending! -bounces around excitedly- So, so good Yabou. You did an excellent job even after so much time has passed. And everyone had a happy ending. -sighs happily- I reread the hole thing last night and today, just get a renewed flow and it was just SUCH a good read. So much wonderful fluff, drama and suspense. And when Kagome called Sesshomaru a geezer? Yeah, woke up the hubbin laughing at 6 am reading that. Cracked this Shadow up. XD As did the line : "Resisting the urge to skewer the hanyou" Hahahahahahahaha! Skewer! This remains one of my all time favorite stories. Great job my dear! <3333333
Yabou...a beautiful ending to a beautiful story. This is why it was truly one of my favorites! Thank you for coming back to us and finishing this story. I hope you will grace us with another!
AmoraLynn (Chapter 10) - Wed 23 Feb 2011
Wait wait wait, Shippo and Sango?? And who is Inuyasha's mate? I feel like I should know the name but I can't place it. :(
AmoraLynn (Chapter 9) - Tue 22 Feb 2011
Its coming to an end! Thats so sad, yet so wonderful!
lilyash (Chapter 1) - Tue 22 Feb 2011
I love this story and Im super happy that u have made a new chapter i never though I would get to see u coming back ancd writting because I love ur work and this has been one of my fav fanfiction stories of all time. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next part thanks again.
Yay! after forever and ever new story!
AmoraLynn (Chapter 8) - Sun 20 Feb 2011
It had been such a long time since I read this I reread everything today. Its heart breaking that she hasn't been able to catch InuYasha so that he can be with his family. And now after so much seperation she and Sesshomaru will be seperated again. I only hope that the seperation will not turn Sesshomaru cold. I'm looking forward to the next update!
lara (Chapter 8) - Fri 18 Feb 2011
I found this story yesterday I didn't stop reading till now....I love this story but I am dying to know what the markings on her look like you never described what they looked like or what color they were or what pattern they were oranything it was so vague.I also wanted to know something to know something ..Kagome & Sessh have now been Mates for what 600 years give or take ??? or am I wrong??? & how much longer will she have to wait till she reaches her own timeline & what will happen when she does??? & this gift of sight was it a gift or a curse...how was it that the 'Sight' gift/curse were actually spirits/demons that actually tried to take Sessh's life & kill him ??? & what going on between Sessh & Kagome ...are they or is he becoming distant..??? Does he still love her hopelessly & want noone other than her ??? Now that his father has died can they have pups of their own ...even though Sessh's father never specifically said gave his permission & why would he deny Sessh & Kagome the right to start a family of their own when he knew how long they had been waiting??? even when only 2 yrs after his beloved Mates death,he took a wife & had another child of his own ??? one would think that with Konton knowing how badly Sessh & Kagome wanted & how long he'd made them wait saying reasons such as...the timing wasn't right,the lands were in a time of unrest,Sessh wasn't ready to rule ...even though Konton knew, Sessh didn't want to rule,he knew that Sessh & Kagome only wanted to start a family of their own...& what better way to prepare your son to eventually rule lands with many families,then allow him to learn by 1st taking on the responsibility of being a father & Mate with his own family???Was Konton... to selfish,to ignorant of his own sons needs & desires,to blind to see that he was pushing Sessh away by denying him the right to have a family of his own & especially when he married his (2nd) wife & then shortly after their wedding acknowledged how he,himself felt knowing he about to start another family..would that have not awoken in him to what his own son was suffering...the desire to procreate??? at least as soon as he realized his new wife was with child & you knew & saw how caring & devoted your daughter-in-law was to both your 1st mate & then your 2nd wife & how supportive she(Kagome) was during her(your 2nd wifes) pregnancy & the birth of your 2nd child...why/how did he not or could he not realize how much of a hypocrite you were being by telling your son he couldn't have a child ,when you were about to have one yourself??...........even if they were not speaking,all he would have had to do would be to send a scroll to your son or his mate & give them permission??? did he die without ever telling Sessh he could have pups?? is there another reason that Sessh doesn't want Kagome to be with him at this time??? is it that he really just wants her to stay to with these elders to find help/answers or a cure for the spirit/demons/visions??? does he still want to complete the bonding of their souls when she has caught up with her time & it's no longer frozen for her??? does he still love & want only her & when the dragon danger is over does he want to complete their Mate bonding of their souls & have a family with her???
are they going to have a chance for happiness,love & family together???
Autumn (Chapter 8) - Fri 18 Feb 2011
I wonder how long they will be apart this time. I can't wait to get to the time period where she left.
aiko (Chapter 8) - Fri 18 Feb 2011
oh my... more plese !!!
katlady (Chapter 8) - Fri 18 Feb 2011
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
you dont know how happy you made me by a new chapter
I could just hug you right now
please please please update soon
Kitsunegirl01 (Chapter 6) - Fri 28 Jan 2011
PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE!!!!!! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOONNNNN!!! >.< I SOOOO WANT TO READ THIS CHAPTER DEARLY. IT IS A REALLY GOOD STORY TO READ. IT'S MUST READ!!!! >.< PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE REAL SOON >.<
Autumn (Chapter 7) - Sat 04 Dec 2010
Yay, You're continuing!
Darrakk (Chapter 7) - Sat 04 Dec 2010
Oh, the convoluted web you weave.
Ahhh... just finished reading all the chapters togehter (again). Dying for the update. I wonder why Sess's so upset abotu the tatoos? Great job, as always. Take care!
inugirl18 (Chapter 1) - Mon 08 Nov 2010
I just want to start off saying how happy I am to see that you are final goign to finish this story this was one of my first fanfiction that got me really into sesshoumaru and Kagome. I love this story every much and I was sad when you stoped writting I almost gave up every rerading some of your work, and i hope to see the final chapte very soon. Thak you and your a grate writter and you make wornderful story lines I hope you might once again write.
Oh how sad, what will they do? I look forward to the next installment.
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