Hola , por fin Termine de leer tu historia, y es una de las mejore que he leido. El tratamiento de los personajes principales esta bien pensando para Darles un desarrollo logico, principalmente de las relaciones entre los hermanos y ellos con Kagome! Gracias por la historia! !!!!
Yo aspiro que la continues pronto....ya ha pasado mucho tiempo desde el ultimo update, sería una verdadera lastima despues de tantas horas de trabajo por los capitulo presentados que no la terminases. Por favor, cada dia un poco de tu energia y creatividad para seguir escribiendola. Ademas, de verdad que me interesaria ver cómo tu construyes los siguentes capitulos ( seguro que la historia llega facilmente al capitulo 100! ) y los sentimientos entre los tres personas principalmente como crecen !
El trabajo artistico de escribir llena enorme! Yo no escribo pero pinto y hago grabados; a veces no es facil porque falte la musa y/o el tiempo suficiente para hacerlo bien, pero de todos modos esta en nosotros adentro el poder expresarnos por medio de la palabras y/o los colores!
Continua!
This story was incredible. I couldn't put it down. I read all 72 chapters in about a week. Thank you.
Mari (Chapter 74) - Wed 14 Dec 2016
hey there. Wanted to let you know this is like my fifth time reading the story through. I love it to pieces the amount of detail the storyline everything. I really hope that you have not given up on it and I look forward to its completion.
mimi (Chapter 1) - Tue 25 Oct 2016
Please finish this story!!! I have been waiting for this story for years to be continued or finished!!!
I cant wait to read more!!! Ive read it all in 3 days its a great concept and its the second time ive read it keep up the good work
I love this story! I hope it gets an update soon!!
alexis (Chapter 74) - Thu 03 Dec 2015
Great storyyyy!!! I love the direction you are taking this storyyyy!!!! I can't wait to read the next update hope it's soon!!!
Emu (Chapter 74) - Sun 04 Oct 2015
Love the new chapter, can't wait to see where you go from here. Do you still need a beta, I'm in college but should be able to squeeze in time to help you with the story.
Saeko (Chapter 1) - Fri 04 Apr 2014
Also, I do hope you're going to change the whole 'period being heat' thing in the last few chapters. Women are not fertile when we bleed. In fact, the opposite is true. We expell all viable eggs during the time that we bleed. We're fertile, or 'in heat', at the opposite end of the month. Maybe it works differently in youkai females. But I think since the chemicals we release at that point in the month would give off a different scent, the boys shouldn't be getting confused about if she's more or less likely to get pregnant. Especially since they've been working with humans for such a long time. So far that has been my only problem with this story. Let her get irrationally mad at them for some other reason, like a reaction to the hormones the doctor has been injecting into her for all this time finally catching up to her or something.
Saeko (Chapter 1) - Fri 04 Apr 2014
Dunno if Tsuki Ai has started yet but there are about 8-15 typos in the first chapter. A few of which are in the first few paragraphs. And Blue, you're evil!! Making us wait even longer... *sigh*
Uhh when the younger brother comes in I think it's supposed to say diary, not dairy like dairy milk, and at the end it currently says cravings like I crave some good food right now rather than carvings like carved out of stone. Other than that I'm hooked. It just knocked me out of the flow of things when I read those two..... oddly placed words.
-KD
Lena (Chapter 74) - Sat 25 Jan 2014
I swear I've read this story before, but I just sat here the last couple of weeks. And read it again and I still love it. Can't wait for the next update. Glad you came back to it.
Lena
Debra (Chapter 74) - Thu 23 Jan 2014
So glad you are going to continue this story. I originally started reading it when you were up to the 60 something chapter. I always wished you had completed it, it was one of my favorites. Very original in the changes and the whole breeder situation. I especially love how close she has gotten to Sesshoumaru. I really look forward tI seeing when Kagome finally does get pregnant and how the three progress in their relationship.
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