You're missing an 'e' at the end of the word "none" where Inuyasha tells Kagome, it's none of her business. Other than that, I don't really get the 'joke' Sango made to Kagome at the end

--Kaminoko (c)2011

I didn't get to finish this chapter but here are some suggestion corrections. Look thru the rest of your chapters and see if you wrote where instead of were

Ø  Kagome sat on a hill attempting to get some homework done; a task that she found was nearly impossible in the beautiful and deadly surroundings of feudal Japan. She had other distractions too, besides the scenery first and foremost were finding the jewel shards, the next where (1) the antics of her companions. The developing relationship between Miroku and Sango (2) but they don't see it yet. And there was defending poor Shippo from Inuyasha's constant tyranny, then there was Inuyasha himself, they where always fighting. Anything (3) from why she was at home studying to food, mainly Inuyasha wanting to know why there's no Raman.

o   Correction 1: were

o   Correction 2: There was a developing relationship between Miroku and Sango (Not sure if this is what you meant to say.)

o   Correction 3: Then because Inuyasha is constantly being a tyrant, she always has to defend poor Shippo from him.  Lastly there is Inuyasha himself, who is always fighting with her over anything from

Ø  He rated up there with the shards but for a different and realistically less pressing reason. She couldn't help feeling something for him, but what she felt was a constant conflict-with-in-herself. It was something she continued to agonize over, was it really love or where (4) they just friends?

o   Correction 4: were

Its a great story. I love and its in my favs. The only thing that needs fixing is your grammer so to speak. This may sound wierd but i want to beta this story for you. I feel copelled to do so if you dont mind. Please let me know either way. I look fowrd to the next installment

I just realized I think I'm reading this story on 2 different sites....is that possible????

 well I look forward to more. I really love this & I can't wait for more to happen

okay so i've read all of this now, and i hafta say that i LOVE It! though if inuyasha really does destroy the well i kinda hope that kagome hates him. I would hate him if he took away my family.

there has to be more ,what happens when she goes back. Does he really want her??? what's the deal with the pendant..........I'm confused by what it says