You did a very good job of it, I really enjoyed your story. However, I think you were writing a little fast, you have a lot of errors in it. This is not a bad thing, it just means you need to check it over more closely and/or get someone to beta your work. But you are a very good story teller and I think you should keep writing.

You should make a sequel I would love to see Sesshoumaru in court!

omg great job :) loved it

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I absolutely love this! sad that it is finish but delighted that you share this with us! ^^

Seriously ... I love this story. It had all the great elements in one. I'v never read a oneshot that I enjoyed so much. Please continue with your amazing work :]

i'm going to be completely honest with you, I have never read a one-shot that I got this much joy from. Sure, I have read  a lot of good ones, but not any that have brought this much emotion from me. It was an amazing read. Kagome, Rin, Sesshoumaru, all of the characters were written so wonderfully I felt I was watching a tale instead of reading it. The humor, Serious manner and interaction between characters was wonderful. The flow of this piece was written nicely too :) So basically rambling aside, WONDERFUL JOB! Very good piece of work here, keep up the good work!