Interesting begining. It has promise and the notion of a leather and latex covered Kagome is interesting. Your writing style is nice and while I love kouga the oogling is quite appropriate and in character (and gave me a good laugh). I can't wait for more chapters as this looks to be interesting!
NA (Chapter 1) - Tue 07 Sep 2010
awesomeness, update soon
BWAHAHAAHAHAHAH. Memorizing her address. That's hilarious. Looovee you Jo!
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