Reviews for Green Child by Violetcarson

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Himura Asami (Chapter 5) - Sat 13 Apr 2013

I'm so confused.She's dead, but I don't understand. 

How is this even possible!?


Himura Asami (Chapter 3) - Sat 13 Apr 2013

Ooh!

This is so so so good!

I


Himura Asami (Chapter 1) - Sat 13 Apr 2013

What was that?

The Sesshomaru thing and the two loud Kitsune...

Ahhh!?

I don't understand but now I'm intrigued.

 

 

 


Lumi (Chapter 1) - Wed 21 Dec 2011

You had me at your properly introduced and non-labeled flashback.

But seriously, I greatly enjoyed this prologue. Catching up on the rest now!


Anonymous (Chapter 5) - Fri 26 Aug 2011

I love the story so far. I cant wait until the next chapter.


Tiegrsi (Chapter 5) - Sat 23 Jul 2011

This story is AWESOME so far. And I loved the trailer, btw! I do hope you will be updating again soon...your writing style is wonderful and the plot so far has managed to suck me in completely. Can't wait to read more. :D


Ashes (Chapter 5) - Thu 21 Jul 2011

I'm impressed. I really like your story and the novel/epic television series feel it has to it. I didn't read your first version so I can't really compare.

Keep the updates coming. It will make my days trying to find a job less tedious.


Kamiki (Chapter 3) - Sat 11 Jun 2011

I'm so hooked on this story! :) And I think you did an amazing job on your trailer for the fanfic. Really well done :)
 I'm looking forward to an afternoon of getting further in depth to the rest of the story!


hola (Chapter 4) - Wed 29 Dec 2010
oooh dang. another great chapter. that sesshomaru though.. he really dont like 'yasha does he? hope he didnt break his neck! o_O eek! its ok if kagome faints. she's such a tough girl all the time. its ok if she does something a little 'damsely' every now and again... :P

GreyEcho (Chapter 4) - Mon 27 Dec 2010

Wow! Awsome chapter.  BTW the video trailier was cool too.

Glade they meet up in this chapter. Never thought of him with a top knot, not a bad idea. :D

I like your take on Midoriko as well. Also, I'm curious what the pull was about with Kagome and what going on with the current Sessh. Love this fic! Can't wait to read the next chapter. >.< And have a happy new year!


WildcatYST (Chapter 4) - Fri 24 Dec 2010

Very interesting first encounter! I suspec that Sesshoumaru might have something to do with Kagome's sudden fainting spell? Hmmmmm. And his appearance in Inuyasha's time! I wonder what he knows. Very nice chapter. I love the characterization of Midoriko. Definitely reminds me of some grouchy, yet lovable teachers I've had. Can't wait for the next chapter!


JessB (Chapter 4) - Fri 24 Dec 2010

I am liking where this storey is going.  I enjoy some background to so many of my favorite stories, and it looks like you are going in the same direction.  Thank you for producing something in this light.


Ladyfifi (Chapter 4) - Fri 24 Dec 2010

I am new to this story, but so far it looks really interesting! I look forward to seeing future chapters.  Merry Christmas!


vicki patterson (Chapter 4) - Fri 24 Dec 2010

love it, plese keep up the great work, cant wait for the next chapter

 


SweetiePie (Chapter 4) - Fri 24 Dec 2010

I am so glad you updated. Its a great Christmas present :). I worked on your fanart, its not anything great but I'm working on a bigger one, the one I posted is just the begining because I am falling in love with the story the more and more as it continues. I am glad you were so excited its not anything big! And I am soooooo glad you updated, you don't understand how excited I got! But now I am left with even more questions!

Chapter 3: Time like These is one of my favorite songs, and I did a happy dance when I saw the title of the chapter, again song fit the chapter as always! The chapter was good, I wished it was a bit longer, but I loved it none the less. Your writing is impeccable, and I love the use of Midoriko. Its a very original story, I still haven't found one like it!

 But I am wondering why Sesshoumaru hates our dear Kagome? And I want to get to know these two gingers! Again I am waiting for the next chapter. Please don't make me wait too long :)

Joan


austen06 (Chapter 4) - Fri 24 Dec 2010

totally awesome. i really am enjoying the flow of the story, you are pacing it quite well. can't wait for your next chapter. 


hola (Chapter 3) - Wed 22 Dec 2010
i'm lovin this story so far! it's original, has a great pace.. i love seeing midoriko in this, not to mention a young sesshoumaru. i wonder if her traveling back in even more in time is to learn something to bring back? or to change something that will affect the goings on in the feudal era.. i'm even more curious as to what ''green child'' means... anyways, i'm thrilled you decided to share it with the rest of us, and i'm so glad i stumbled upon it! :)

SweetiePie (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Dec 2010

 Ahhhhhhhh. I must say this has become my very favorite story. It’s just so interesting I'm very intrigued on where this story is going to go. I watched the Trailer before reading the story and I must admit it definitely peeked my interest. I was so excited to read the story afterwards, and it did not disappoint.

Prologue: You captured Sesshoumaru very well, there is a bit oocness but it’s not very much, I love how you captured him, the prologue, was interesting enough without giving too much away. And the scene at the end between Inuyasha and Kagome made my heart break it was very sweet even though I am not a big fan of Inuyasha.

Chapter 1: First of all the song goes perfectly with the chapter, it really adds to the feeling you get from the chapter. I especially enjoyed the Midoriko element and the Izayoi element, it adds to the story using characters we already know, but you are adding your own twist.

Chapter 2: Again song fits perfectly. But this one was my favorite, because of the scene between Sesshoumaru and Touga; I have a thing for Touga!

Overall I must say this story has really peeked my interest and you can expect reviews from now on and I will be tapping my foot waiting for that meeting chapter. I hope you keep writing. This story is very well written.

Joan

 


NA (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Dec 2010

-ooooooooooooooooooooooo update PLEASE!!!!! BY THE WAY I LOVED THE VID. keep up the awesome work!


jojo661538 (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Dec 2010

its a great start keep up the great work i hope you update soon are you going to continue the one where kagome ends up as midori the green child? anyways again great work ^_^


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