UUGGHHHHH SIKI. IT'S YOU.
I was reading this story thinking, "What a good idea this is to write it"
Then I got to the bottom of chapter two, and it turns out you wrote it. God, don't scare me like that.
You write beautifully, and it seems I haven't heard from you in a while (which is odd)
Have you finally grown sick of me? Have we grown apart, Siki?
Anyway, wonderful writing, and I love your passive aggressive behavior.
Hoping we are still buds,
Tsyo.
Ps, how;s the Tobe doing?
I truly loved how this was written. It seems such great care was taken. It was beautiful.
OOOHHHH!! I loved this. I've never heard of this greek myth. It was beautiful. I'm sorry you got flame though. I hate when some of my favorite authors get flamed just because some bigot with holier than thou complex decides to 'enlighten us' with their oh so greater knowledge. It sickens me. Why can't they be mature and honest about instead petty and full of malice. I think they just envy your amazing writing talents. I cannot wait to see how you work the Cupid and Psyche story (in which there is another Kag/Sess out there based on this particular myth, though the name escapes me at the moment >.<). Just love your work and can't wait for more!!
Great story and I applauded your response to "Anonymous." A most kind way of telling someone off. Anyway, cute story! =)
Have a wonderful week
~~Mizuko~~
Wow this is really great. I personally loved the ending! It was great how he finally admits to himself that he is in love with her. Overall toatlly perfect! Oh how I love a romantic sesshy!
Kira (Chapter 2) - Mon 13 Sep 2010
Great job!!
I truly enjoy how you have this in both points of View. You never truly specified the names Kagome/Sesshomaru but it was highly implied.
Though I must admit I'm not sure which I enjoyed better; Your fic or you putting the Anonymous reviewer in their place.
To actually post links to Wikipedia like its a truly trustworthy site is something a child would do. Not knowing what a true reliable source is what I'm afraid the world is coming to thanks to sites like Wikipedia.
A true tradgedy for our youth these days.
Great fic once again! Keep up the talented work. Cannot wait to see what you may create next.
YAY~!!! XD
Pygmalion and Galathea~!!
This part of Greek Mythology has been ONE of my favorites~!! XD Ever since I brought an Edith Hamilton(or something like that?) Mythology Book years ago! It kind of reminded me of fairy tales where there's always a happy ending~ XD I'm such a sucker for romance and that part of the book(where there were Mythical Romances and stuff) was the VERY first thing I read after buying it and I couldn't even forget it XD though I didn't know they had a child together? (maybe I forgot that part, I was familiar with their story though XD)
It's very nice to see you remake this mythology story to match Sesshoumaru and Kagome~ Sesshoumaru in this work was acting VERY Sesshoumaru-like XD I mean, with the little(okay, not little.. XP) arrogance and stuff. I like how you keep them very IN-character when you write XD
Kagome being talkative is VERY much like our usual Kagome XD Can't remove that from her~ But I'm sooo glad Sesshoumaru loved even her flaws (no matter how minimal they were XD). Awesome work!! Although The Hunter and the Huntress was on the serious and tragic side, This was on the very Romantic/Dreamy type of romance XD
I'm excited to read your next work XD *cheers on you* Imma spell Goodluck on you Siki~!! XD
*sends you tons of Koala Hugs!!*
Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Mon 13 Sep 2010
Um, ivory isn't stone. It's actually bone -- taken from the tusks of elephants or rhinos. Most ivory carvings are very small for this reason because you'd have to kill an enormous number of animals to get enough ivory to do it. If he was a Roman sculptor in Cyprus his medium of choice would be marble. If you had done even cursory research, you would have known this. This is not to say the writing is subpar. It's very good. You just should have taken the time to actually find out what medium a Roman sculptor actually worked in before writing.
Ivory: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ivory
Marble: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marble
We all understand how busy real life can get! *kicks* But of course, I'd always wait patiently for more of such wonderful stories from you, dear Siki!!
Your words make everything more vivid, and I could actually feel the disgust in Sesshoumaru's words as he described the whores 'charading as members of the fairer sex'. Great descriptions there! :)
The idea of him sculpting her is really romantic and almost seductive, in a slightly obsessive way. Not psycho stalker-ish, but in a powerfully attractive silent, broody manner. Sesshoumaru is very in character here, and I like the way he mentally berated himself.
The ending sentence to this chapter took my breath away. I can only imagine his surprise when he realizes that Aphrodite did indeed hear his plea. More please, Siki!! I NEED MORE~ *dances around impatiently*
Darcy (Chapter 1) - Tue 07 Sep 2010
I loved the first chapy!I can't wait to read more!I have never read a story with this kind of twist and am eager to read more so please update soon!
Please, oh pretty please, continue! It's so beautiful!
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