HI, I LOVE YOUR FANFIC ''LEGACY'' .....I  HOPE YOU WILL UPDATE AND FINISH THE STORY.....PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON.....LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE.................................................TDAN

Enjoying the story. Hope for some updates.

I've been mighty good about waiting. One update? Oh, pleeeease?

Great story, I hope you come back and update soon.

Great story. I absolutely love the plot.

Please update soon. I love this story. I cant wait to find out what happens next. Please keep going.

please give us more info on who her bro is mated to & if she & Sessh will be Mated soon ...along with, I hope, a visit to the seers or visions sent to her by them, seeking to help her in any way possible to restore truth, honesty & honor to her fathers lands & help her,Sessh, her bro ,her firends,her allies,along with any & all willing to restore honor to the land & expose Takuma for his lies  & past transgessions & they wish to set up secret meeting in a protected & safe place that the seers have been preparing since the Kami's alerted them that Kagome was touched by the Kami's & she has a destiny beside that of the Jewel.....

I really like this story & really look forward to more & soon. I also wish very deeply for Sessh & Kagome to find love,happiness & strenght together (I also wish the 2 were soul mates) I really don't want to have to worry about all the potential danger Takuma represents so I hope you won't  torture us with a long drawn out  story as I find it so very hard to deal with the fact that Kagome is always hunted & tormented & I can only wish your story will be full of hope, love & victory for the good guys (meaning Kagome & Sessh)...they are going to need allies & info they can trust along with all the help  possible....I really wish for once to see the evil (Takuma,his mate & any friends & allies he has pay harshly for the lies & the evil they've done along with seeing them be exposed for all they've done)

Please update soon & give us some info & answers...as of now you've given us no info on her bro & if he's true,no insight to Sessh's feelings for Kagome or insight into Kagome's feelings for Sessh & any info on why her bro if he really is her bro is true & where he's been & any info or help from the Seers or the Kamis regarding the info the Seers told Kagome's real dad about along with what way Kagome was touched/blessed by the Kami's........& what the letter filled with lies regarding Kagome that Takuma sent out..also I can't help but wonder if along with Kagome's scent,markings & any other things about Kagome that would show that Kagome is who she claims to be  & anything  or any evidence Takuma never considered that will help expose Takuma for the lies he's told ,the liar he is & the proof that he alone  killed Kagome's father,Takuma's own brother in order to take over the land...along with proof that he also tried to kill Kagome a month after her birth. I really hope his mate & the people who did his bidding in the past have after all this time learned that Takuma manipulated & blackmailed them into helping him & that since then they've collected as much proof as possible to expose Takuma along with his lies & his greed.

I also hope you don't put off Sessh & Kagome getting together & if anything I really hope you don't put if off till the end & instead hurry it along .............as it feels as though every story where Sessh & Kagome are supposed to be together it is always either a one shot or 40+ story left incomplete or they finally get together at the last chapter leaving the entire story feeling incomplete.

I look forward to your next update 

0o0o0o0o0o0o so intersting! seriosuly i would have never thought some of this up! i LOVE this story you've made it into!

eeee I love this story! It is so wonderfully written..... I can't wait for more!! :)

Yay new chappie! Stupid prig of an uncle poor Kagome has. I'm sure he will get what's coming to him, though. Thanks for the update!

this is rather awesome! your doing so much more then i ever could with this plunnie! have i told you i love this?!?!?!

I'm dying to know if the letter the evil Uncle sent out to all the lords, the one Myoga said he heard from one of his spies,a servant of Takuma-the evil uncle,if Sessh got one of those letters??? he hasn't mentioned anything & he didn't ask about the letter she received that very morning & he got one also. I'm so confused by his behavior, in the beginning of this story he couldn't understand his desire for her that confused him,or his beast obsession with her, then he found out the truth,helped her transform,taught her to use her sense,showed her how to hunt & they both agreed to abide the betrothal that there parents wished for...he even admitted to himself that as a human she was beautful & as a youkai she was even more so...& that was it ...he started to ignore her completely once they got to his shiro. If her father had been born with the mark of the heir,his younger brother ...her evil uncle must not have it, her bro..if he really is her bro...Sessh would be able to tell if he smelled like a blood relation to her & her parents or if his youkai was similar to theirs also..right??? Since Sessh was pretty close to both of her parents & he & Kagome can both smell lies..right??? where has this brother been & why if he is older was he not born with the mark of the heir??? if he brought the scrolls from the evil uncle...was he with him all this time??? can this brother be trusted??? what is all the yelling about now as she was introduced??? it is well known,I would imagine ,that her mother was pregnant & a month later both of her parents were killed by the uncle who then took over control of the lands..not with honor but by killing off his sibling,the Lord & the Lady & I imagine everyone was under the impression that when he killed them that he'd also killed their newborn pup ...is this right or not??? now in the same month that Sessh met his intended who was still unborn at the time,Sessh was very close & loved her parents,he had grown up with them always around & was still a pup himself when as soon as they left to return to their lands to have her,Sessh dad brought the human hime,pregnant into their home & the Inu was born Sessh dad died, right???so this is going on in the west while in the south Kagome is born,her parents killed & she dissappears..mean while Sessh has his own hands full right??? now in this story is/was his mother Matsu & if so is she still alive??   

Oh I'm confused & I feel bad for Kagome. Sessh has known her for a while...he knows what she's been through,knows what she has to face & he most likely knows exactly who they are,if Sessh is the Lord of the West & knows & communicates with the other 3 lords..of the North,East & South...then he knows the Lord of the South right now is Takuma & that he killed Shinosamu & his Mate as had to deal with this ass for the last 100yrs he must know stuff about him & others that she can't read about ,information about people in the here & now & not just the archives he has her reading. Plus Myoga said Takuma sent something to all the other lords so Sessh must have gotten one also & if the lord of the North helped Zenzo & his mother hide with help from the lord of the East then it makes me wonder if Sessh of the West, has any connections or friends with the lords of the North & East ??? If I was Kagome I would get Sessh alone & ask him straight out since he's known her a while & now that she's become an Inu Youkai & it turned out that she was the daughter of his fathers best friend & that both of their fathers agreed when they found out she was to be a girl decided that she was to be betrothed to him.....aside from him wanting to honor their father's wishes,he already somewhat knows her & knows she not only has to pass this council thing & fight against her Uncle who has been the ruling Lord of the South for the last 100 years & want's her dead as is going to be trying to kill her & has probably been planning things her death for a while,not considering she has all new powers & abilities that she has no training in & in the past when she fought she wasn't just human she was Miko & now if someone challenges her to her fight or something she has no clue how to defend herself & by telling everyone at this council that he's her betrothed....she could be dragging him into a world of shit & is this what he wants ????????

I mean she's always been one who cares for others & in the fight against Naraku it was different because Naraku had done something to all of them so they were all trying to kill him. This time it's different for her ,the way she must see it is that this is her fight & Zenzo wants revenge for his father who was killed with her father.........but in this fight she'll have ahead of her She must be worried for Sango ,Miroku ,Inuyasha ,Shippo are free.....I'd think she would ask them if they want to go out to start their own lives....this Uncle of hers may have all of the South & who knows who else after her......& then Sessh,Rin & the Western Lands......the way I see Kagome she'd be worried & asking Sessh that when their fathers decided to have them betrothed they were equals, both Lords & friends & they were making a decision on 2 heirs........now both of the father's are dead & Sessh has become a Lord but her father was killed & his land taken over & if she hadn't been thrown down the well she'd be dead right now & Sessh would be free to Mate someone that his equal,someone that could benefit him & his lands or someone he's involved with already,someone he wants,somebody he's interested in or if there is someone who he cares for.........I think she'd be worried that just because he happened to be there when she got out of the well & she confided in him she didn't mean to drag him into all this craziness where someone could get hurt & he's done so much for her already,helped her thru the transformation back into an Inu Youkai & he's helping her already with so much the way I see Kagome is she'd be asking him & telling him he's a good catch he's honorable & attractive & for someone that is interested in money & titles he must have many females throwing themselves at him & she would probably want him to know that she respects him & is grateful to him but she has no interest in his money or his title & if he decided to wait to see if she & Zenzo survive whatever is coming & if she's still alive when it's over & he still wants to court her & then they decided they both wanted to become Mated she wouldn't be to Mate someone that is going to keep concubines & or other females............ & right now she doesn't know what Sessh's idea of a Mate is ...is it someone to have an heir with & then he'll have other sex partners & his Mate will be able to have her own sex partners?????   I would think Kagome would be worried & want to ask her friends about getting involved with what she may be facing.I would think she would also be worried & want to talk to Sessh & him what he wants & what his opinion is of things because once they announce their involvement what if the people want her dead want to go after him to as soon as they find out she is his intended???

I just realized in Chapter 8 when they were heading to the west you mentioned them all flying with Sango & Miroku on Kirara, Shippo & Rin on riding Ah-Un, the dragon,Kagome stepped up next to Sessh who wrapped his Mokomoko around her waist while Sessh held the reins of the dragon but I imagine Kagome & he were flying on his cloud next to the dragon,you didn't mention Inuyasha but usually he runs & leaps along side but you never said how Zenzo was traveling. I like that he had 4 tails & I hope Kagome finds out more from Myoga & others about her parents...I also wonder if the seers will contact Kagome

The Seers who contacted Zenzo's mother & told her that one day Zenzo would be the one to locate the heir,Kagome & with her he would be able to get revenge from the ones who had killed his father.he didn't understand until the Seers contacted his mother 2 weeks ago just before his mother died & told her where to go to find Kagome. These were the same Seers who told Shinosamu,Kagome's Dad, that he would have to take her to the 'Bone Eaters Well' & the well would send her to the Miko Sayuri 500 yrs in the future where she would be kept safe,hidden & be able to grow ...The seers were 2 women a youkai & a Miko........the youkai woman's blue eyes turned black as she went in to a trance & spoke first & said-

 "She will be saved, tormented, taunted, threatened, but never broken. She will be yelled at, scolded, talked down to, but never despondent. She will be strong and when the time is right, she will take up her birthright and her place as Lady of the Southern Lands."

Shinsamu & his Mate were in a panic & afraid.........& then the Miko woman's brown eyes turned white while she went into a trance to speak to the Kami's & then she spoke-

 But the pup has been touched by the kami, and she must fulfill her destiny. The miko Sayuri is one of great power—only she is able to conceal the pup as needed, though it will be at the price of her own life if the pup decides not to return and claim her birthright." For a moment, there was a tense silence, and then the Seers looked to the sky. "And so it shall be!"

So I'm dying to know what the Seers meant by being touched by the Kami's.

& you said the jewel was shattered again when they destroyed Naraku (a year or 2 ago, I don't remember or feel like checking just now) & they've been collecting the shards again since it happened so does Kagome have some of those jewel shards & since the Jewel that Kagome was born with in her body 100yrs ago wasn't the same one that Kikyo watched over & then had burned with her body 50 yrs ago then what was that Jewel & will Kagome still be able to find,sense,feel & untaint the shards???

Does she still need to find them & complete the Jewel???

I'm still rereading & I know they just went hunting together but I was  wondering if she was ever going to start showing any signs of abilities.Like Sessh has the whip,the ability to produce poison & 2 modes of flying along with truning into his beast.

Are you going to show her discovering hers??

I decided to reread the story from the first chapter  before I went ahead & read the new chapter you just updated so the entire story would be fresh in my mind. .....   I realized when you described the visual changes you only mentioned the markings on her face but you didn't mention if she received any markings on her body or if her hair color changed or if her hair grew longer,thicker & silkier as I'd expected it to & I thought that even though she had the lighter silver stripes on her face & the darker silver 8 point star on her forehead,I realized that even though you hadn't described any on her body...when she bathed or changed would she & Sango find other stripes around her wrists,shoulders,hips,back, ankles & legs????I mentioned all those since I know she only just received all of her youkai & her body dispelled on the reiyki or whatever it's called .I sent you an IM with some questions so I'll leave it at this

wonderful update!

Awesome update to this fic. I loved reading every word of it. I'm loving Zenzo as Kagome's advisor and Shippo's tutor. As for the rest of the group, it's good she gets support from Miroku and begrudgingly from Sango. As for Inuyasha, he needs to get over the fact that Kagome is betrothed to Sesshomaru for years and move on. Kikyo's gone and for good this time around. There are other females out there. Besides, it is possible that Mrs. Higurashi, and not Kagome, is Kikyo's true reincarnation. He needs to stop acting like a child who's lost his favorite toy.

As for the whole concubine thing back in chapter 6, I don't think he'd go to any other female but Kagome since she's a Princess of the South and future Lady of the West as soon as they deal with Takuma. Oooh, can't wait for the next chapter.

I don't truly see why you aren't pleased with this chapter... I think it was really cute! =)

Have a great week!

~~Mizuko~~

I liked this last chap but I was wondering a few things. when they left Kaedes home to go to the western lands you didn't mention where Zenzo was while you described where everyone else was & you didn't mention if Inuyasha although against her betrothal to his brother, is still willing to fight for her life & protect her..it seems she & Inuyasha need to discuss their understanding that neither of them could have seen this coming & it will take them some time to adjust,of course it is up to you as the writer as to wether or not Inu will stand by her side as she still has to confront the fact that her Uncle is going to try to kill her .

You also haven't gone into any of Kagome's abilities yet & I thought that some  of her new powers & abilities would start to show on their own like a whip if she had one,the ability to produce poisons -if she had that ability (it would also explain why Sessh's poison didn't harm her when she pulled the sword free in Sessh & Inu's dads tomb) ,the ability to fly as you showed her father had & I know nothing about the moko moko that is apart of diayoukai (if both her Mom & Dad were dia youkai than I would imagine that she is also one) but I was thinking that it may show only after the first time she changes into her beast form & stay with her when she returns to her humanoid form. I also figured that with these threats against her life that Sessh would be working with her to train her how to discover & use some of her abilities asap before she attacked. Especially since Sessh knew both her parents I thought he would have knowledge as to what abilities they had & therefore might have some idea as to what some of her powers & abilities may be. I remember that in your description of Zenzo's father he had the ability of teleportation & I wonder if Zenzo has it also....I also wonder what Zenzo thinks about his new Lady (the daughter of the couple that his father served) & the fact that although she is younger than he & had no knowledge of him, she already has adopted a kitsune as her own, taking him in as her own kit when she was still so young herself. I would think that fact alone would give him a great respect for her,especially seeing how she cares for him & is always holding Shippo & looking out for what would be best for him.

I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter...I can't wait to see if Sessh will explain in more detail what he meant by...mating.I know he said it was her decision to continue the betrothal once they agreed to the courting & I hope she brings up the fact that she needs to know if what Inuyasha said about him keeping concubines for himself while they are courting & once they are betrothed & I hope she tells him that she doesn't care what he did or had before her but if they are to work towards a betrothal it is important to her & she wants to know his feelings about it because she will not bond herself to a being as a life mate if she'll have to share him or compete for his affections & she would want to know if  it was Sessh what his feelings would be if his Mate had a harem of men to go to for physical/sexual gratification when he was not available,busy or if she just had the urge..............................I really hope that Kagome brings up something such as this to Sessh....seeing as Inuyasha brought it up it must be on her mind.

I can't wait to see where this story goes