whoa, whoa, WHOA!!!
That was some nice suspense there! I was at the edge of my seat! :)
keep it up, PLEASE!
iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 7) - Tue 05 Oct 2010
Holy crap this story is AWESOME!!!! Where in the world do you come up with this stuff, this is absolutely wonderful! Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us, I can't wait to read more :D
Terry Lynn (Chapter 7) - Mon 04 Oct 2010
Oh my gawd!! Your fanfic is too addicting. I really didn't see that coming. -You must update soon!
Aki (Chapter 7) - Mon 04 Oct 2010
Awesome chapter
Still eagarly waiting for Sesshoumaru to regain parts of his memory
:P
Go DreamWorld!!!!! xD
More please!! I just got chills EVERYWHERE. This is so awesome, combining naraku with sesshoumaru is BRILLIANT
Uh oh *hears dirty little secret playing in the background* Well now poor Sango's in on it too. I can't wait to see what's next or worst if Taisho-sama remembers.
Great Story!
at least she's not all alone anymore... but this does make things a bit complicated (will Naraku find out? will Sesshoumaru remember anything later?)
Zyren (Chapter 6) - Fri 01 Oct 2010
GAH!! this fic makes me antsy and I absolutely love it!! i really love your storyline and your take on the characters, keep up the good work.
Zyren
I can't say enough how awesome I think this story is. I am seriously in love with the plot. I think you did a fantastic job creating such a creepy atmosphere. I think you had my skin crawling along with Kag's when she kept seeing the sinister things on that tape.
Its such an inventive twist on Naraku I think :)
Hmmm as for Sango's final thoughts, for starters girl, don't erase that tape!!!! If you're going to confront the Professor, which I imagine Kags has to at some point. It would be good to have that audio as back up.
I read your older works when you posted them forever ago on fanfiction-dot-net. Though I'm disappointed you haven't really updated those, I'm glad to see you haven't lost your touch. The story telling and character portrayal in this fic (even with Sesshomaru being sort of OoC) are excellent. Going to re-read your old fics while I wait for you to update Something XD.
Shade (Chapter 5) - Wed 29 Sep 2010
I dont' wanna use the word 'surprising', but I'm going to say this is surprisingly good. Not that I expet it not to be, but this story shifted gears on the reader about 3 times in the first 5 chapters, but you managed to pace it so it's not rushed or jumbled together. Amazing job you're doing, please update this soon.
Jasmine (Chapter 5) - Wed 29 Sep 2010
Oh my god, Frey- I love this! Almost makes me not upset about the Sins update being so (so so SO) late. I can't wait to read more.
This is getting so good. Poor Kagome has to give into that creature now, but I love how you tied in Naraku as the villain, very ingenious.
| Bwaaaah! *chokes* This is... quite the story.
Kagome seems to have gotten herself in quite a pickle, to say the least. I thought it was rather clever of you to incorporate the Nah Rah Ku bit in there, and break it up as you did. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter, and wondering over the possibilities of how this will be resolved. Also looking forward to more smuttiness... I'm a citrus fiend, I admit it without shame. *devious smirk*
So, onto the technical sh**. I think you did a great job in portraying Sesshomaru in this story. Very well done. The description is phenomenal. When you talk about them first coming upon the temple I can see it perfectly in my mind. Also, you have an amazing skill at making a reader feel as they go. When you were describing the bit about the anomalies in the temple, I actually had goosebumps.
So, that being said, I think it's safe to say this story is just awesome. I love all of your stuff, and I can't wait to hear from you again.
Much love!
CR~
OMG OMG OMG OMG :O!!! I NEED to know what happens next!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Aki (Chapter 5) - Tue 28 Sep 2010
Sesshoumaru should know! It should come back to him in a dream or something!
He should knowww! Ahhhh, and the plot thickens.
Please update soon
LunaGirl (Chapter 5) - Tue 28 Sep 2010
Excellent chapter! Loved everything about it! Plz update soon!
I so should have seen that name coming...but I didn't! *facepalm* I don't know why but your description of the demon's POV made me think of Anne Rice's vampire novels (this is not a bad thing IMO). Nah Rah Ku's threat to destroy Sesshoumaru, not physically, but professionally was perfect! Subtle, believable and utterly effective. Good job there. I'm so afraid for Kagome. The "offering" surprisingly didn't put me off even though I usually hate anything non-con so well done on skirting the fine line. I hope she finds someone who can help her-perhaps she needs to consult with her grandfather? Maybe Sango will come through with some support? Perhaps reading some more of the demon's history will offer some clues? I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Wow, did not see that name coming!! that was really dark, yet sinfully carnal as well. Really enjoying this more and more.
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