I love it! Can't wait to see what the next chapter holds, especially since you go so much into detail of youkai society and behavior. Very nice.

Wooo this is GREAT! I love it! Gonna keep reading now :)

I LUV IT UPDATE SOON PLZ

Awsome chapter! cant wait for the next one!

I <3 this story so far!

You've done a great job, it's really well written and the detail is fantastic, I can't wait for your next update! :)

Pretty good so far, hope to see more soon

I LOVE IT yes he is very MUCH in character and I enjoy the story . I am on the edge right now because I can't wait for the next chapter ! Please update soon . This story is just too good .

MORE UPDATES!

love it please update faster

Wow, very emotional. Looking forward to the next update... Hope Kagome makes it.....

I love it! :) Please update soon!

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you've made me  gave this  see what you made me  do?  Not  only  that  but I had to read the other  chapter on fan fiction too

you better  Update soon  either here or there or else

okay that was  my threat heres my  re view

^^ Love it  it sad  EIn died  but I would love to see were you go with this

Cant wait till net chapter

Have you posted this story before? It sounds very familiar?

I like it & plan to look it up on FFN to see if you have more chapters up there. Slight correction in case you're interested, reign is like a king reigns over a country, in both cases you used it you wanted rein like rein in a horse, etc.

Just as an FYI the 'fangs' on Inuyasha rosary aren't fangs they're magatama beads, here's a Wiki article on them if you're interested; http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Magatama

wow. this is very interesting. i just had to go read what you had on fanfiction.net. cant wait till you post chapter 3

Wow. Just wow.

I can't begin to explain to you how well you've done with this first chapter. Your concept is fresh and very original, and you write very well. I love the retrospective feel of the first part of the chapter, when Kagome was walking through the snow by herself. You've managed to keep her in character and show her thoughts and emotions in a way that draws your reader in.

I can already tell that this is going to be one heck of a fic. I'm eager to see where you take it, and how you manage to bring Sesshomaru back from the grief that he must be feeling. By the way, I'm fairly positive that Sesshomaru would completely flip out if Rin were to die unexpectedly - you did an awesome job portraying his emotions; when he said that she was asleep, my heart jumped into my throat to see the depths of his despair.

Anyway, besides a few missed words - as though you were typing too fast and forgot to write it - and a few misused words, you don't have very many mistakes. All you really have to do is read over it, and it'll be as close to perfect as it can get.

Good job, and I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

~Aubrey