Reviews for Pink Carnation by Madison

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LunaGirl (Chapter 11) - Thu 04 Nov 2010

OMG! I can't believe she finally found out! But at least now she knows and Sesshomaru is able to hold her again in his arms! That has to count for something! This was a great chapter! Please, please, update soon again! PS: Congratulations on your nominations, you sure got my vote!


LunaGirl (Chapter 9) - Thu 04 Nov 2010

Bwaah! THAT WAS SO SWEET!! This story is good! Please keep updating!


LunaGirl (Chapter 6) - Thu 04 Nov 2010

Engaged? You lying sac of sh*t! I can't believe he went that far! I love this story, please keep writing!


LunaGirl (Chapter 4) - Thu 04 Nov 2010

I just found this story and I wanna tell you that it's sooo good! This chapter was so emotional and sad! I feel bad for Sesshomaru! I hope things get better for him.


AmoraLynn (Chapter 6) - Sun 24 Oct 2010

That dirty lying wretch. Sure they are all lying but he has just taken it way to far.


AmoraLynn (Chapter 5) - Sun 24 Oct 2010

Crying for the last few chapters. Sitting at my desk at work crying. If there was anyone else here they would think I was crazy. This is beautiful and I'm so looking forward to the rest of it. 


knifethrower (Chapter 10) - Sun 24 Oct 2010

Just the kind of Kikyo I love to hate~ a calculating, smug, self-righteous b***!  Hope to see more of her!


trinity3000 (Chapter 1) - Thu 14 Oct 2010

So let me start by saying I love your story, but the last chapter irritated me (not an insult to you in anyway, I'm sure you have a plan on where you are headed).  After Kagome was in the accident and they found out about forgetting the past year I could understand her friends and family not wanting her to remember her emotional pain when she was still trying to physically recover from the head wound, but now that she has recovered and is actually asking questions.  It is so wrong for everyone to lie to her and to keep the things that they removed from her apartment.  I know it was done with her best interests in mind, but they are still so in the wrong. 

I have read some of your other stories and I know you are a great writer and will pull everything togther in the end, but I really hope someone breaks the silence soon.  I don't think I can stand another chapter where everyone who "loves" her just sits by and lets her be manipulated.  If I was her and my family and friends conspired to keep the truth from me and let someone that hurt me so badly worm their way back into my life, I can assure you that I would not be the only one walking away with head trauma.


Alpine (Chapter 9) - Wed 13 Oct 2010

Simply Splendid!!! I shed a few tears right there at the end... I love a little fluff... Hope this works out and we can see our hopeful lovers unite and kick the baka Inuyasha to the curb...

Hugs
Alpine ^_^


Firehauke (Chapter 9) - Wed 13 Oct 2010

this series kills me.  damn inuyasha!  I understand where the idea to protect kagome came from, but I totally disagree with it and want to shake sense into sango for even coming up with it!

 

Blah, sorry, my punctuation isn't behaving - i think I'm tired :P

 

Good story!


Yohko (Chapter 9) - Wed 13 Oct 2010

LOVE the chapter! Fluffs are more than welcome! Nice moment even though Kagome was drunk. :D


Tara-Yomitorika (Chapter 8) - Sun 10 Oct 2010

Can't wait for the next chapter! Sorry for the angry sounding reviews, but good stories always make me angry, at least at the bad guys. I hope this story goes the way I'm picturing it, but if Inuyasha and Kagome stay together, I may actually have to track you down and give you a piece of my mind! lol Keep writing, you are an amazing author!


Tara-Yomitorika (Chapter 6) - Sat 09 Oct 2010

I blame you for getting in trouble for me cursing at my computer. I would just like to say that if I ever gain the ability to travel into stories (my secret most wished for super power), I am going to strangle Inuyasha. At least. Possibly also do something involving the removing of his eyeballs... and other 'vital' body parts. Still a great story, but still not FIXED!


Tara-Yomitorika (Chapter 3) - Sat 09 Oct 2010

just so you know, even though you are the best author in the world and I will probably lose my mind if you ever stop writing, you are making me cry and I hate this story right now. FiX IT! PRONTO!!! lol


helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 8) - Mon 04 Oct 2010

hmm...bet Kikyo's gonna be the Wild Card. she'll definately be ticked off when she finds out Inuyasha's engaged with the girl he was two timing with Kikyo!

 

anyway LOVE IT!

especially since subconsciously Kagome's picking up puzzle pieces...man are they all gonna get it when she remembers...especially Inuyasha!*evil snickers*

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!


Momo (Chapter 8) - Mon 04 Oct 2010

can you write Inuyasha in a freak car accident where he is somewhere far far away and Sesshoumaru will be by Kagome's side?? =D


Sakuramaru (Chapter 7) - Wed 29 Sep 2010

Thank goodness they finally got some time alone!  I love how Kagome is seeing Sesshoumaru as "captivating", because he is!!!

 

And as usual....stupid InuYasha!!!!

 

Thanks Madison!


MissTeak (Chapter 7) - Wed 29 Sep 2010

LOL yes, sweetie, you do write more when you're not feeling well!! Thank you for the updates; they really made my day.

Anyway, YES! Another awesome chapter of Pink Carnation. The Morning Glory did not bode well for what was going to happen in the story, especially how all the readers know what happened in the last chapter. Inuyasha and his stupid, brainless declaration was simply...UGH. Gross to the MAX. Back to chapter 7. *takes a deep breath*

Now, Inuyasha should know, as an adult with common sense, that lying so blatantly would eventually get him into nothing but immense trouble. There is something known as the 'snowball effect', and I am quite positive it would TOTALLY catch up with him in no time. So...congrats, Inuyasha. You totally had it coming! (I should save this phrase for the future but alright, I would say it in advance) It's kinda upsetting to see Kagome believing every word of what he is saying, but of course, it is the only right thing to happen, given how the poor girl had totally forgotten about what had happened to her in the past year. She is like, this blank canvas, but the sad part is that he seems bent on tainting it with fancy lies. Sheesh.

But still she is not completely senseless, judging from how she actually looked down at her ring finger to see if she has anything there. To make things worse, so Kikyo and Inuyasha's relationship had ended because he refused to marry her and settle down. This is just smooth, Inuyasha! You've successfully dug another foot in your own grave. Nice one.

OMG. They didn't. Tell me they didn't.

PHEW. Thank goodness they didn't do anything more! I'd totally drag Inuyasha off Kagome if I have to LOL.

How are they ever going to work everything out?? The mess is growing, and Maddie, you're just too talented.

Thankfully, Kagome had the sense to call Sango up to inform her of this wretched 'engagement'. Seriously, enough of your rubbish, Inuyasha! You should just kill yourself. LOL. For as much as Kagome is still clueless and being tossed around like a ball, I thought that her senses were pretty sharp in the sense that she could actually notice the reactions of everyone to her so-called 'engagement'. LOL. It's great to know that Sango is her rock in this storm; she protects Kagome and while she hides the truth from the latter, she is not afraid to show her emotions and reactions to whatever Kagome has to say about Inuyasha and his lies.

YAY!! Kagome, you'll be saved soon!! Kudos to Sango for telling her about Sesshoumaru, even though it was such a teeny tiny development. But still!! They are definitely moving in the right direction, and I cannot help but squeal and go into my crazed fangasms! <3 Sweet, totally!

Even the part where Kagome thought Sesshoumaru to be different from Miroku was sweet! It's as if she knew deep down that this guy was somewhat different and would eventually play a different role in her life.

YAY for Sesshoumaru!! YOU CLEVER LITTLE DOGGY! You made the first move!!! YAY! Now that's what I call positive progress, even though it was not exactly smooth. I thought the moment of Kagome telling him about the engagement was...wow, just so emotional and impactful! Sesshoumaru's reaction was so heartbreaking :( Like, yes, she's happy but you're not at all, Sesshy! Tell her that! Kagome's pretty cute too, to have confided in him directly to tell him about her confusion over the impending engagement and wedding and whatnot.

OMGOMGOMG the fluff is killing yours truly!! *chokes and writhes around* It's soooooo awesome! I really love it!! Sooooo cute, and he has finally come up with a counterattack against Inuyasha's stupid actions!! XD I can totally smother him in kisses now! All the way Sesshy!!! GO!!

And of course, you get the kisses too for your awesome update darling!!


tika_taki (Chapter 7) - Wed 29 Sep 2010

hi there! I always enjoy reading your fics of Sess-Kag, including Pink Carnation.

However, once I read this chapter, I dont understand why Sango should congratulate Kagome on the engagement of Kag & Inuyasha. I understand as a good friend she wanted Kag to be happy et cetera et cetera, but she congratulating Kag oh her engagement with Inuyasha... it just doesnt make sense. I'm sorry for my rude comment.


Pringles (Chapter 6) - Tue 28 Sep 2010

I will assasinate you! I will bazooca your a$$!!! I will make you suffer as much as you are making Sesshomaru suffer and worse!!!!!!

 

Gah, I need a break from your story right now but I will be back!!!! I need to finish this now......still hate you.....


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