Look, I know this was just for a challenge, but this would be a great story to continue. I want to know what happens next.

Look, I know this was just for a challenge, but this would be a great story to continue. I want to know what happens next.

rofl man thats funny. Nice piece

geez, what a dog :) great story

lol, the last part was so funny. good story though. :)

hahahahaha lol that waz funny at the end! update soon plz

I loved reading this story. You did a great job on it. To bad it had to end.

Why are your chapters so short. This story is so good. I can't wait for you to update.

OMg, OMG, OMG!!!!!!!You got me hooked

i <3(luv) this story!!! i jus wish the chapters wont so short but other then that its great. plz update soon!!

0.0 wow!

Some typos, and a few mispellings. (like, ware -- wear)

But who cares about those? You're still an awesome writer! ^^

Love the story.

Update soon~♥.

Loving wherethis is going, I cant help but wonder what will happen next.i

THATZ WAZ GUD I ENJOYED IT KEEP UP THE GUD WORK LOL UPDATE SOON PLZ

this story is really good! i hope mine will turn out as great as this!

lol thatz waz gud cant wait to c watz nxt update soon plz

thiz story iz amazin cant wait to c wat happenz nxt update soon plz