What? WHAT?!  You just stop there?  You're killing me, Smalls, KILLING me!

No really, would love to see this updated.  If you can..or want..don't mind me begging.... *sniff*

Great update!  You showed great emotional restraint in this chapter, giving just enough detail so we could "see" what was happening, rather than having a heavy hand and "telling" us.  No melodrama here, but the reader can feel the intensity of feeling from all the parties concerned.

I think Scotch and Bourbon are technically kinds of whiskey.  I'm at work, so I can't go to my cupboard to check out the proofs, but they are all strong liquors.  I'm really enjoying this (in a sad kind of way, given the subject matter), and am looking forward to your next update...  Keep up the great work.

Very poignant scene, and once again, very well-written. 

Well-written.

Oh, man... now I want to cry!  So heart-wrenching...

Amber