Reviews for The Moment by elisa128

Paralelsky (Chapter 2) - Fri 01 Oct 2010

Oh boy! That was weird, but intense. And while I knew Sess was doing the stalking I had to read it until the end. Tragic really. But good! Good work sister!


SesshysRose (Chapter 2) - Fri 01 Oct 2010

wow...didn't expect this at all! very well written...never saw sesshy as the stalker type...but you made me believe lol :)


Creature of Shadow (Chapter 2) - Thu 30 Sep 2010

O.O That was sooo not what I was expecting. I think you captured a pyscho stalker very well though. I can't believe the ending too! *cries and goes to locate chocolate comforts* Good luck luffs! <3


Inkasha Taisho (Chapter 2) - Thu 30 Sep 2010

The first one was so cute and then...darkness. So dark and twisted....but very well written. It's an interesting take on the prompts.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 2) - Thu 30 Sep 2010

O_o


swift death (Chapter 2) - Thu 30 Sep 2010

wow, that  was the best fanfiction i have read in a while. sesshomaru as a stocker. Wow! i love that idea and even though he kills kagome in the end its kind of sad, he should have told her from the very beggining, and here i am thinking its going to be a cute romatic story but man was i wrong. kind of sad though that she had to die, sadder still that he did to. keep up the unique work


Itsumademo (Chapter 2) - Thu 30 Sep 2010

You know i thought you did a lovely job my dear!! Much better now that it's a full story/ checklist of stalking awesomeness and doom. Hahaha.

Punctuation was still lacking in places though i felt, made some sentences confusing...you should tell your beta that. *nods*

Whatever contest or challenge this is up for i wish you great luck! As well as my vote should that matter 0-o *shrug* > 3 <

*strangle cuddles*


Creature of Shadow (Chapter 1) - Thu 19 Aug 2010

Soooo cute Lisa! *vote*


neko-tan tmb (Chapter 1) - Thu 19 Aug 2010
plz write mor!!!!!! i beg u

Kirai (Chapter 1) - Wed 18 Aug 2010

Aww... this is soo cute. Can i have a little Sesshomaru to keep around? 

On a technical term, there were some grammar, spelling and confusion issues that i noticed. Other than that it was fine, ME likey


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