Ooooo. What happens next? You gotta tell me...Pleeease. I don't think I can handle the suspense.
Oooh this story is moving along well. Don't leave me hanging now...
Uh oh...I wonder how this will turn out. I esp wonder though if Kagome's time limit will speed up her romantic relationship with Sesshoumaru. I hope that everything is more or less ok and that love doesn't die with Kagome. Can't wait to see what happens next :)
OMGGGGGGGGG
okay you knwo were gona ask you againa and againa and again but this is sooooo making my night off better
XD
loved both chapters XD
please please PLEASE tell me you are doing another one soonish XD
OMG i cant wait to see what happens next
NOOO a cliffhanger. So can't wait for the next chapter
OMG I HATE CLIFFY'S HURRY UP AND POST....LOL
AH!!! Don't stop there!!! What happened next?!
Whenever I think of blood I always think of much more common womanly things...
Oh well, this was great! Thanks for all your hard work and I hope you continue soon, cause I love reading it.
REE WHAT THE DUCE HAPPENED!?!?!?!?!?
WHY WHY WHY!!!! MY REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
*cries at you* TT3TT!!!!!!
Fixit
*whines*
*whines more*
*has small timpertantrum while wigging update bribery c0okies at you*
Fixit!!!
Tha Plot thickens!
OMG WHAT HAPPENED!?!?
*Clicks next button*
O_O REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
*whines at you*
I think you did a really good job ^_^ This is an interesting stance to take. Usually in fanfics, it's Kagome who is opening Sesshoumaru's eyes to what love is, not the other way around. I think you did a good job changing things up.
I particularly liked the last line. It tied everything up nicely. It was unusual for him to be so open...and slightly poetic...with what he thought her love would be like. That being said, I think he has the capacity to understand and express something that's of sentimental nature, especially given the circumstance of the story and that he was in love once before. It was definitely surprising though. If I were in Kagome's spot, I'd definitely be blushing too, hehe.
Ihope their upcoming interactions will be in support of this chapter. Since it had some heavier emotions in it, it seems like this chapter will be a good jumping off point for them to start getting to know each other on a deeper level. Prior to this chapter, their interactions have been amicable, respectful, teasing at times...and very funny, hehe. Now, thanks to this encounter, perhaps they can start seeing in each other what everyone else has been seeing and trying to push them into. Table has been set, now let us feast on some delicious gooey love stuff ^_^ hehe
Keep up the good work!
Don't agonzie over the chapter, it was beautiful.
How cute! He is really nice to her!
You can't seem my face but I'll tell you that I've got his big goofy grin on my face.....Poor Kagome if only she knew what she was yipping at Sesshomaru she would die of embarassment before she could be killed by inu-papa's youki....XP....I wonder why Sesshomaru hasn't confronted her on the subject, he obviously knows she not saying what she thinks she is saking so why doesn't he tell her? Though I guess telling her could be pretty embarassing in of itself...hehe.....love you story...Nyuka
Wonderful! I love the way you've brought Sesshoumaru to fall for Kagome, and I love how Kag is being tricked to talk dirty! I wonder--will she ever find out? Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Lytari
I enjoyed the chapter. You can tell that you put a lot of work and thought into it and I think it comes across beautifully. I think its very sweet and a nice segway to Sesshoumaru realizing his feelings, but I wonder how ur going to get Kagome to realize her's. and in enough time before she succumbs to The dog demon spirit inside her. I can't wait to see what happens next in the game of everyone's influence :)
One word:
daaaaaaaaaaammmnn!
That was sweet.
Aw, very touching, who thought Sesshomaru could be so in touch with his feelings. hehe, if he's being suffocated then get him an oxygen mask and tank to him stat.
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