this story is extremely interesting to say the least, i must admit that the only reason i started to read this was because of the title. halestorm is an awsome band, liked them ever since i saw them open for trapt and shinedown.
I've been very bad at reviewing this story, but I finally remembered to because I wanted to say CONGRATULATIONS! on the baby:)
Now then. My thoughts when reading this chapter: Kagura, you little bi-
Okay, so maybe we shouldn't go with my exact thoughts. Suffice it to say that I wanted the beat her witchy little self into oblivion:) As far as the rest of the story goes (bad Siki! You should have been reviewing the whole time! Bad!) I love it! I'm always excited to get updates in my inbox:) I'm actually in the middle of writing a chapter and I had to stop to read! I'm loving your plot and I do believe we now have a twist! Exciting, exciting!
Thank you for gifting us all with your pretteh, pretteh words:)
~Siki
tiana (Chapter 9) - Sun 29 Aug 2010
awwwwww that waz so cute lol i cant wait to see wat happenz lol update oon plz
I reviewed the wrong chapter :( lol but awesome this is amazing none the less pwananana like I said before you never fail to please and I humbly await the next installment .
EPICLY AMAZING ! MORE MORE MORE ! lol loved it as usual you never fail to please ;) pwahahaha faihtully await the next installment !
aw,that last line was so endearing. Thats such a Kagome thing to think! So carmingly innocent, and hopeful. One point of confusion, and it might just be me remembering things wrong - but I though ealier you said that she was paying for Souta's schooling, which was why she was working at the club? But in this chapter he's in high school... Perhaps you said she was saving up for his future schooling, and thats where I'm lost. *blush* And more of a pondering than an actual question, but: Sesshomaru's reservations with Kagome originally had been that he couldn't afford the scandle of being involved with an exotic dancer, BUT now he owns a club? Isn't that in and of itself scandle worthy? And now he's showing an interest so does that mean that 1) he's going to try and change her, and hide her past? 2) he no longer cares about the scandle involved with dating her? or 3) is he going to see her on the side but try and hide the fact that they are together? options 1 and 3 provide HUGE angst and I just LOVE ANGST so I'll deffinately be sticking around to see where this goes. I'm eager for more. Keep up the good work, you are doing great!
tiana (Chapter 8) - Fri 27 Aug 2010
now that waz gud lol cant wait to c wat happens nxt plz update soon
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