Intresting, I am so wanting to know if there will be a 3 chapter, I think you have something hear, it sounds great I love it, when I first read it I was having a hard time understanding this to be rape, because she was not fighting back, yes she burned him but she did not hit him or kick him or just scream!!!, I would have screamed and kicked and spit and all that stuff, even when he told her to suck his "cough" well you know, that I would have just bit it off, and ran like hell, I like this story!!!, and I hope Kagome gets a backbone and when he does come after her if she ever leaves him and runs, I hope she she hurts him!!!.
again great 2 chapters and I hope we see what happens with Kagome!!! if she runs or stays or leave tokyo for good!!!.
Hugs
Hattaru.
-_~
i tnihk there's gonna be a continuation
Lexie (Chapter 2) - Wed 11 Aug 2010
you sure thats finished? theres a few loose ends that could be tied up in there
please update if you continue
maribel mota (Chapter 2) - Wed 11 Aug 2010
o please continue , because the plot is very good, so good that i could not slip the night before just thinking where the story let to.....so please make more chapter's.
umm ... that was something. o_o
the writing was great and all .. but the rape scene got me speechless and little bit of fear about guys in total. '_'
i hope you keep writing because i feel that kagz needs revenge sesshy do ... that to her.
ideas for kagz revenge is that sesshy gets rape by kagz with sex/torcher toys/devices while recording it on video, or have sesshy badly beat almost to death, or get naraku or a other character to rape him like a bitch like he did to kagz that he will never have sex again while kagz watch the whole scene. :3
there just ideas if your planning to have kagz revenge that i will love to read.
Shari (Chapter 2) - Wed 11 Aug 2010
Oh man I wish u would continue this story. It has such great potential to be an amazing chapter story!
intresrted to see how he plans to keep her
Ava 365 (Chapter 2) - Tue 10 Aug 2010
OMG!!!! That man is the worst everrrr!!!! I really hope you continue this story. The avenger in me needs that karma comes back and bites Sesshomaru in the ass!!! You did a great job, as I was reading the second chapter I kept squirming in my seat and clenching my fists. This portrayal of Sesshomaru is really despicable!!!! I hate him too!!! (my heart clearly goes to Kagome)
silver (Chapter 2) - Tue 10 Aug 2010
you have to continue this story!!! it was awesome and very well written. this is the first story in which sesshomaru is a principal, not teacher, and kagome is a student and they hook up. well if u wanna say its 'hooking up' since kags didnt want it. but this story is great and id be really happy if u continued it. at least tell us if kags gets pregnant, even though the chances are low, but still. pretty please with cherries on top!! :)
Peaches (Chapter 2) - Tue 10 Aug 2010
Man that was so good.... U did a very good job...
damn! You have got to continue this story! Its way too good to leave it just there
Aki (Chapter 1) - Tue 10 Aug 2010
Yes! I agree with Miss Teak, Sesshomaru the principle is really so bad.
Poor Kagome...She's falling into his trap, but I hope she'll enjoy it. He he
I'm dying to see the second chapter. Please update soon!
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