Reviews for Maid for You by Luna

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SilentlyFuming (Chapter 10) - Mon 06 Sep 2010

ooh boy, I smell trouble ahead...  XP  EXCELLENT. 


Rowdys girl (Chapter 9) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

Whoa! Sesshoumaru a hacker??? How very natural for him. LOL! This is a really good story and I am enjoying it a lot! Keep writing and keep me happy!


SilentlyFuming (Chapter 9) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

oooh, muy interesante


AmaViarra (Chapter 9) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

Sorry about the last mistake in the other review! I meant I like how you write their interaction. Anyways, interesting job for Sesshoumaru! never would have thought of that, good job in keeping it original.


AmaViarra (Chapter 8) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

Good chapter. I like how yoru write the interaction between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. Good job!


AmaViarra (Chapter 6) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

Sesshoumaru really needs to keep a tighter rein on his credit cards XD Poor Sesshoumaru going through so much torture. Is it bad I love it so much?


AmaViarra (Chapter 5) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

Ha! I was right about him saying 'I do' to the person that delievered to be a bad thing! This was a wonderful chapter, though I noticed one small mistake. I apologize if this is what you attended and I'm just seeing things, but where it says '“I did not make this purchase. My younger brother is and, child though he is, I will not be held accountable for it.” Instead of 'My younger is and-' I think it should be 'My younger brother did' That's the only thing I noticed, and as stated before it is just a small one. Again, good job on this chapter and story so far!!


AmaViarra (Chapter 4) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

So not Sesshoumaru to show so many emotions to someone he does not know. Yet, at the same time his though process is exactly Sesshoumaru. Amusing chapter :)


AmaViarra (Chapter 3) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

hah, I'm suprised that Sesshoumaru wasn't the least bit suspicious when it kept stating 'divorce' also now that I think about it, I'm surprised he didn't reject that package ecspecially when the woman who delievered it asked if he would treat her like his bride etc. Great job on this chapter too, the Miroku being the contact for this part made me laugh.


AmaViarra (Chapter 2) - Fri 03 Sep 2010

Wonderful job on this story so far! I'm already addicted XD. Though it is hard to imagine Sesshoumaru having messy living conditions. It is a new take on him, which I am enjoying so far! Though I think maybe he shouldn't have said 'I do' when she had asked him that question. Good job, keep up the good work!


Tsuki (Chapter 7) - Wed 25 Aug 2010

This story rocks :D


kat (Chapter 7) - Wed 25 Aug 2010

you probaly already put this in the story but i dont remember...6 months? til what she goes back or?! and cant wait for more^^


L-desu (Chapter 6) - Mon 23 Aug 2010

oh i just it when ppl torture poor Sesshy-cakes!  loved this one.


*cathstar (Chapter 5) - Sat 21 Aug 2010

I don't like Zettai Kareshi either D: Or any of the author's other series. I couldn't get into them; but this I like :D

Rest assured, I will be a faithful reader :3


KitKat (Chapter 5) - Sat 21 Aug 2010

Haha I love this :)

Poor Sesshomaru but I guess, this has to happen so he becomes not such a icicle.


L-desu (Chapter 5) - Sat 21 Aug 2010

oh i love this!  can't wait to read more!


Gabrielle (Chapter 5) - Sat 21 Aug 2010

Like a good and loyal reader, I should have reviewed every single chapter that you wrote. I adored it that much. It was simple, sweet, clear, and amusing. It flows well, words fit properly, and it just teases the reader to continue to the next chapter. Even now, while writing this review, I am wishing that there were dozens more chapters to read. I could never, ever pull off such lighthearted writing. So, in a sense, I appreciate that ability in others, including yourself. I applaud you in producing something so commendable. Please, continue.

Thanks!

-Gabrielle


Sunset Senshi (Chapter 4) - Thu 12 Aug 2010

FREAKING ORIGINAL ! I LOVE IT !


jojo661538 (Chapter 4) - Thu 12 Aug 2010

hehehe poor sesshoumaru keep up the good work i hope to read more soon ^_^


MissTeak (Chapter 4) - Thu 12 Aug 2010

Aww this is adorable, and it reminds me of the shoujo manga Zettai Kareshi (Absolute Boyfriend)~ How cute!


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