Thanks god you updating pretty fast or my nails would be gone with anxious waiting O.o
You know..I was going to poke you today about updating...but then you updated wuthout the poking! But I will be poking tomorrow, I assure you...because THIS CLIFFIE AIN'T FAIR!
I love the practical bent you gave this chapter. I was afraid I'd be seeing angst and anger and emotions going whacked all ove rthe place, but the way you wrote Sess in this one was just perfect! I actually sighed out loud in relief - our little pooch isn't going to be turning into Romeo or Othello anytime soon just cuz he got betrayed. Naw, he's gonna be an ice block and hunt down the idiot who did this to him.
Abridged version - great job keeping Sess in character despite his woes. <3
REDWOLF (Chapter 72) - Tue 15 Mar 2011
Poor Kagome may actually think he really wants her to go ....for real, poor thing.
Loveyaa (Chapter 72) - Tue 15 Mar 2011
Lets see how things end from here. She is majorly breaking some kind of rule and I wonder how she will be dealt with when Naraku finds out. Sesshoumaru has to give her some kind of slack. She not only was pressured into doing this (without really knowing what she was doing beforehand) out of desperation but she told him bout it. She didn't have to do that. I can't wait to find out what happens next though regardless :)
Great chapter! I had a feeling it was some kind of situation like this. You wrote it beautifully. I hope Sesshoumaru finds it in his heart to forgive her!
CMorghan (Chapter 72) - Mon 14 Mar 2011
*whimpers* that last chapter hurt my heart.
Evil Bastard! preying on poor innocent girls like that, just horrible.I hope he gets kicked in the nads. Did she leave the room or his apartment? Damn, i don't know what he's going to do and that is worrying, i hope they make up and everything turns out okay.
Lauren (Chapter 72) - Mon 14 Mar 2011
Aha! *feels accomplished* I meant to ask you this weeks ago, but have you ever seen 'The Suicide Club' or 'Noriko's Dinner Table'? They're Japanese "horror" movies. Not exactly the same, but the basis is pretty siilar. I was like, "Why does this remind me of 'Noriko's...' so much.
In any case, good chapter. I think I'm a little less disgusted because of the way the films had spun things, but it's still horrible. Nicely done.
~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
poor kagome! :[ but i wonder why she was never bought back, hmmmm......
naraku's a butt
AWWW poor kagome!!! I can't wait for more love :)
hug me. ::sniffs:: i'm gonna need it. that AWFUL naraku. :( and i'm supposed to be writing a nar/kag too....how on earth am i going to write the next chapter for it with all this naraku hate in me now.... ::weeps::
PLEASE get them back together soon?
Nuuu!! Sesshomaru! Don't send her away!! D:
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Can i cry with her, he's reverting into his judgemental and cruel persona and it's heartbreaking after all the fluff going on before. hope she has a good explanation because at this point i don't think anything will really make him forgive her for not telling him.
Loveyaa (Chapter 71) - Sun 13 Mar 2011
I wonder how Kagome will get herself out of this one. This is going to be one speech. I can't wait to see what she says and how things turn out :)
loveyaa (Chapter 70) - Sun 13 Mar 2011
I wonder why she would have to divorce him? Why would that change anything. WOuld Kagome just go back into the system and marry someone else? I wonder what will happen from here. Will they stay together or will one of them call it quits? I am eagerly awaiting to see what will take place next and what the damage will be from it. After all, all is fair in love and war :)
Paige (Chapter 71) - Sun 13 Mar 2011
This is getting sad... I hope that she has not done anything too bad...
Looking forward to the next update! :)
Lauren (Chapter 71) - Sat 12 Mar 2011
Understandably harsh. Good for Kagome. She should have been truthful from the beginning.
I'm with Sessho right now. She may have been cornered into working for Naraku and Sesshomaru may or may not be her first case, but Kagome HAS to know how she'll be viewed. And Sesshomaru feel betrayed (as he should). Oh well. You reap what you sow.
~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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