"He was the killing perfection and he had already given her numerous little deaths."
This beautiful concise sentence sums up a whole world of sensuality.
"Taking pleasure from her body was all that he would allow himself; it would have to be enough."
Bittersweet and full of longing, exquisite.
"I had to know if only for a moment how it felt to be desired."
One of the loveliest lines ever written. It makes that 'moment' a thing I so long to experience.
Your work captivated, engaged, moved and held me in your thrall. I so thank you.
Nilee1 (Chapter 1) - Fri 06 Aug 2010
I don't know whether to feel sorry for Kagome for her lack of self-esteem or jealous because it's Sesshoumaru who shows her what she is truly worth.
Love this story--it will continue won't it?
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