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FluffyandKagome (Chapter 11) - Wed 02 Nov 2011

I enjoy this story but I don't think you realized your time line error with Sango's pregnancy. In the beginning of the story you stated she was 5 and a half months pregnant and its been atleast 4 or 5 months since Kagome was injured. ^_^. Update soon


RubyJeweler (Chapter 11) - Wed 02 Nov 2011

Heheheheh...Poor Sesshy is freaken jealous! OMG. Awesome! I love the story so far. ^^


1CarinoInu (Chapter 11) - Tue 01 Nov 2011

I've yet to see an author write a public claiming except for Sidhe in Through the Mirror. And it wasn't nearly the exposure it could have been. Since Kagome is more deity with the recent change it sounds like she wouldn't mind? 

Im really enjoying this story. Keep it coming!


Latent Talent (Chapter 10) - Sat 08 Oct 2011

Damn. That's awful. I can't wait for Sesshoumaru's response. He'll tare down the world for his little birdie. His Sebastion will just be the icing on their wedding cake.


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 10) - Tue 04 Oct 2011

Soooo.... I guess if they want offspring (would they be chicks, pups, or simply children?) Sesshomaru has to kill or help kill this guy? :headtilts: Sounds like a plan. Stupid genocidal prick.

Thanks for writing!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 10) - Mon 03 Oct 2011

awe! sad now! fix it!


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 10) - Mon 03 Oct 2011

Can we say Naraku-like, but worse?  That's messed up that Kagome/Aiden/Fushicho-sama can't bear young because of this dude. Talk about taking revenge for being rejected. I have a feeling all hell will break loose once he finds out about her whereabouts. Apparently, Sebastian won't know what he's dealing when it comes to Sesshomaru. But Sesshy better watch out. He just might get cursed as well. I still want to know what happens with Haruko and Inuyasha. Once a cheater, always a cheater. Can't wait for the next chapter.


Thoughtful confusion (Chapter 9) - Mon 26 Sep 2011

Ooh, this is interesting. I'll be looking forward to another chapter! ^::^


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 9) - Tue 02 Aug 2011

Three more weeks of training with Sesshomaru? THey should pass pretty quickly. Besides, by the time those weeks are up, Kagome's competition will end up being piles of ash by the time she's done with them. I wonder what will have becom of Inuyasha and Haruko. He'll probably end up cheating on her as well. Dude, haven't you learned anything? Those whores could carry all kinds of diseases. Eww. Looking forward to finding out who 'he' is and I don't think it's our delusional hanyou, but someone much, much more formidable.


SashaMarie (Chapter 9) - Tue 02 Aug 2011

Please update soon. I cant wait to see what happens next. Thanks


1CarinoInu (Chapter 9) - Tue 02 Aug 2011

Oh Yay and update!  Love the phoenix idea - and she has truly arisen from the ashes!

It's good to see that the phoenix half protects Kagome, but I'd like to see Kagome come out and kick so butt - I imagine that's the reason for the training besides proving her worthy of being the mate to Sesshomaru.


TruGemini (Chapter 9) - Tue 02 Aug 2011

LOL! That was an awesome chapter. I love how the Phoenix and Kagome meld so perfectly together not being afraid to give up power to the other. Fantastic!


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 8) - Wed 27 Jul 2011

I'm wondering who 'he' is. Maybe a new and powerful enemy threatening everything Kagome holds dear? I hope you reveal who 'he' is real soon.


Jaded_butterfly (Chapter 8) - Wed 27 Jul 2011

I am so glad that you were able to get the time to update a few chapters. i have been intrigued with this story from the beginning and have been waiting for you to update so thank you. keep up the good work and please dont disappear again.


NicoRavenPen (Chapter 7) - Mon 25 Jul 2011

~~Ohhh I love this! XD It was a nice twist, having her assimilate with a phoenix! ^_^ I'm eager to read more, so keep it up!


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 7) - Mon 25 Jul 2011

Tsk, tsk, tsk. Inuyasha ought to be ashamed of himself for acting the way he does. Because he wants to have his cake and eat it too? Talk about immature and selfish. And I wonder what will be done about that Haruko chick. Some Miko-in-training she turned out to be with her sleeping with Inuyasha, most likely knowing he was engaged to Kagome. She has some explaining of her own to do. But calling her a whore seems a little harsh as Inuyasha may have been the only she was with. Then again, who knows at this point? Oh my, what if she ended up pregnant? That would be a hoot to teach Inuyasha to be mature.

Well, at least there's Sesshomaru to pick up the pieces of Kagome's broken heart and avert catastrophe. I hope he mates with her REAL soon. Can't wait for the next chapter.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 7) - Mon 25 Jul 2011

O_o okay only the top half is chapter 6....


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 7) - Mon 25 Jul 2011

you loaded chapter 6 as chapter 7


TruGemini (Chapter 7) - Mon 25 Jul 2011

Good!! Someone needed to put Inu in his place and Sess was just the one to do it. Now Inu will have to suffer with her being with someone else. Will he accept it finally?


lara (Chapter 6) - Thu 24 Feb 2011

I wish I had a better idea of what she looks like I just can't figure it out. How could Inuyasha have the nerve to bring his disgusting self to Sessh's to look for Kagome & have the balls to bring the whore along with him,the whore he he had sex with in what was supposed to be his & Kagome's bed,at a time when he had to know that Kagome could,would or should have been along anytime. Who the hell does he & his whore, she may have been a Miko in training but her slutty behavior with a hanyou who was supposedly about to be mated...neither of them have an excuse worth hearing & how could the girl after being caught screwing the guy that was supposed to mate the Miko that the village loved & owed their very lives to,if I was someone in the village with clout (I don't know what happened to Kaede as you've not mentioned her) I feel that both Inuyasha & the Miko in training should be tossed out of the village & Sessh along with the people of the village should tell all that they had disgraced & dishonored themselves...the miko in training should be denied training as she is obviously not worthy...I believe her actions go against the trainings of a Miko...if either of them had any honor they would have come clean to everyone in the village & especially Sango & Miroku on what they had been doing,what they were caught doing & where they had been caught doing it....

where is shippo ..you have not mentioned shippo at all???

you mentioned assasination attempts but did not say who was attempting to kill who?? I know Many people & youkai cared & loved Kagome including Koga's wolf pack...& I can imagine between the Sango's cat demon,Shippo (if he's still there) & Koga & his wolf tribe who consider Kagome their sister & a member of the wolf tribe & they all would have gone immediately looking for her to make sure she was safe & with the amount & strength of power she let out whenshe was attacked...any youkai,miko or monk would have recognized Kagome's power & aura & the youkai would have recognized the release of her power & the scent of her blood & the youkai would have found pretty quickly her blood,along with the massive amount of her blood & freaked,they also would have been able to scent out the cats that attacked her & feasted on her ,right??? then it couldn't have taken them long to figure out that hours after the attack,Sessh had found her & with no scent of death they must have figured out that Sessh saved her as I do believe at this time they might not think he lived,liked or cared for her but they knew he'd be honor bound to try to save her & take her somewhere safe................................I look forward to finding out about Kaede,Shippo,whatever assassination attempts Sessh had found out about & any info on how they all ended up at Sessh's & if Inuyasha & his whore had told the truth to the rest Kagome's pack then how could they have the audacity to come into Sessh's home to see Kagome ???? Sango & Miroku would have told him without holding back that he had no right to enter Sessh's home & attempt to see Kagome along with his whore...Miroku & Sango would have had no qualms about telling Inuyasha he'd ruined anything even the chance of ever having a friendship with Kagome & he did not deserve to see her , speak to her or be forgiven..& the girl should be disgusted with herself & if she & Inuyasha want to be together after the dishonorable way they treated Kagome...then both of them would need to find a home away from the village & I'm sure that nobody in the village that knows the truth of what they did would want to see them,Right????

   Please update soon...I would love to find out what her friends know & have found out since she'd left & what they think & feel about the situation.


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