wow....damn, itsy. really. damn. a depressed kago and a useless sess.....it's an interesting premise....them not defeating naraku...... ::is getting ideas:: maybe you could make another fic with that? a multi-chappie one? with a happy ending...?? ::speculates::
This was really good, hun! Sad, but good. If you ever had the time (I know, I know ;p) or the interest, I'd think you should totally turn this into expand on this, keep the story but add to it and make it a longer tale. I think it would make an amazing story, but it's wonderful as it, too.
Kirai (Chapter 1) - Thu 16 Sep 2010
awww...that was sad. T-T. *huggles*
Twiiiiiiiiin! I am so sorry I forgot to review!!! I got thrown off on what I did and didn't do when I beta'd it. *hangs head in shame* It was a great fic though and it really is a shame that you couldn't get it in the tourny. You would have done well. <3 u!!!
I REALLY like the idea of kagome writing everything down.
And that Sesshoumaru ended up reading it.
Its awesomesauce; and Im eager to start on another of your stories.
Diana (Chapter 1) - Wed 01 Sep 2010
I loved it Itsy. I'm going to go hunting for more now. lol
swift death (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Aug 2010
nice story and did she really die? :)
Tis so sad!! ;-; Great job!!! :DD I really enjoyed it!! It was well writen and not a moment was dull. Keep up the good work!!
Naraku (Chapter 1) - Fri 30 Jul 2010
<33 Deffinately a sad and unexpected ending. I enjoyed it. Now enjoy the review I left you. -TP's his sibling-
Aw, what a tragic story! I admit, this is definitely the first story I've read where Kagome must finish the battle with Naruku in the present time. You did a wonderful job, and though I'm sad you will not be participating in the tournament anymore, I'm so glad you wrote and posted this! Great interpretation of the theme "book"!
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