I really like this story & I wish you'd update it more often.I don't know why but I thought the last time I read this story that this chapter where she returns from the bath with Sango wearing the new Kimono from Sessh, makes dinner with Sango for everyone but Inuyasha & Kikyo & then goes to sleep on Sessh was already part of the story.
I like this story & look forward to reading more of it.I really hope you continue this story. I would love to see some interactions with just Kagome & Sessh together with Sessh letting his guard down.I would love to read about him talking to Kagome, explaining to her how Inu Youkai mate for life, how they wait all their lives till they find their one true Mate & ask her to imagine waiting your entire life & for a youkai that means hundreds of years & then to find yours & see she is with someone & you'll never have her,never find happiness thinking you'll be alone forever & thinking of the lonliness. Then he can explain how the first time they met in his fathers tomb, as they were fighting & he got close to her he suddenly realized that she was the one....his one true Mate & she was with Inuyasha & all he could feel from her was anger,hate & fear & all he could think was .........if I had gotten close to her before we ended up in the tomb & realized who you were, I would have retreated & waited,watched & approached everything differently but.....I couldn't do anything but think that here I finally found you & you hate me & you are with him. All I could think was you were lost to me & in my mind I was lost.....inside I just snapped & my beast went into a rage because he blamed me & my irrational act to find the sword & that because of my actions we lost you & the stupid sword & because of my beast & I were distracted we lost my arm. The good thing that happened is that over the years I stayed some what close so I see you & any chance I got I would save you & I watched & waited & my beast kept saying that I should watch & see if there was anything intimate between you & Inuyasha & very soon we found out that he was going to the dead clay one & we saw that when you went home to your family & study,he would call you names & be mean to you & as soon as you would leave, he would spend days & nights with her & he would be intimate with this undead being & even when you returned,as soon as he thought his pack was asleep he'd sneak off to her & leave you & the entire pack vulnerable.No alpha leaves their pack,their family alone without telling another to watch.By now I had heard what he said about you,what he called you & that he loved this dead thing & I was happy because this meant you were not his & I just had to find away to fix the damage I had done & be patient till I could come to you.You may not believe this but to me & my beast you are the only female we see,want or love. So my beast & I felt we had to act soon & had started coming to your camp & check on you & your pack. Then the other night when I came the slayer,Sango told me what was going on &......etc
Well you get it .......I look forward to seeing him tell her everything & be himself around her & protect her with the help of the others & I was also thinking it would be cool since Kagome is the Alpha female she should learn to protect herself better & if they ever have pups she wouldn't want to be helpless & feel she couldn't protect them...So I thought it'd be cool is she could start training with the others in the pack & even Kaede (Kaede we know doesn't feel this undead being is really Kikyo because she's filled with darkness,lives off souls & Kaede & the rest of the pack [except Inu] feel/know she's evil & helping Naraku). I think Keade could teach her alot & since even Sango knows that Kikyo & Inyasha are going to try to hurt or to kill Kagome thinking if she died Kikyo would get Kagome's soul & become alive again...which I think is ridiculus...first of all we know Kagome's soul is enormous & for all we know Kagome isn't Kikyo's reincarnation & the piece of Kagomes soul that Kikyo has now could just be memories or that became attached to the Jewel when she had it burned with her body & there is 500 yrs between Kikyos death & her attempt at either destroying the jewel with her body or taking it with her & that is 500yrs between Kikyo's death & Kagome's birth...so even if they did kill her Kagome's soul would move on not backwards & Kikyo only wants more of Kagome because she knows that Kagome holds more power than Kikyo ever did in life & I bet she could learn how to call back the piece of her soul that Kikyo has...Kagome might not be trained but she is far from weak & could easily kill Kikyo & Inuyasha even untrained,she's also way smarter than any of them..Inu has no education & is little more than a savage,he can't even see what is in front of him,..Kagome is only untrained & has poor self-esteem from Inuyasha telling her she's weak,stupid,ugly & good for nothing more than shard detecting....I can't wait to see how you put him in his place..if he was surprised that a new kimono makes her look like a princess wait till he sees her really use her power...I wouldn't be surprized if it turned out that Kagome was more than any of them realize...............PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE continue this story I so want to see Kagome come into her own & be loved & see Sessh & her happy & see Inu realize he's been obsessed with a dead husk that smells like a graveyard & is probably screwing him & Naraku...the Kikyo he knew is dead & moved on
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE write more soon!!!!
always known of his feelings for her & in the pastbut always acted out in anger because he thought just because she was always with Inuyasha that knew
amy (Chapter 8) - Wed 16 Feb 2011
BANG UP JOB, LOL, LOVING THE SESSH CUDDLE!
lara (Chapter 8) - Fri 31 Dec 2010
I really like this story & have been looking forward to the next chapter. I can't wait to see where this story goes & I enjoy the developing relationship between Sessh & Kagome but you never told us if Kagome stated at any time that she was interested, attracted, had already developed a friendship with him & started to feel something more for him but was unsure of getting involved for fear of being hurt or used due to her fear of his dislike of all human's even though he'd taken in Rin & she herself had begun a sort of friendship with him. From where you started this story if Kagome wasn't already comfortable in his presence, accustomed to being close to him ,already friendly with him,had already been held by him or gotten to know a side of him other than his angry or expressionless side, then...... waking up in his arms ,on his lap being embraced intimatley would have been a shock to her system (body,mind & heart). She didn't seem in utter shock so I assume she either had sensed something between them but was waiting to see if he'd make a move to confirm what she sensed or he already caught her alone & openly admitted his desire to court her or explained to her how Inu youkai's know who their destined Mate is by scent & (being the honorable demon he is)explained that his previous actions against her in the past were due to his jealousy &/or belief that his destined mate was lost to him & was involved with Inubaka. Once he realized his mistakes & how wrong he'd been he was very glad she'd not been hurt or worse & wanted her to know he felt terrible for his past actions but since he couldn't take back what he'd done his only wish was for her to give him a chance & the opportunity to get to know him & the for them both to get to know each other........................................uuuuummmmmmmmmmmmmmm ooops sorry I went off on a little tangent trying to figure out what happened on Kagome's part that she went along with Sessh's wishes without freakin out................but I'm sorry I'll wait for you to tell us.......or I hope you do cause I'd really like to know her side & I really , really am looking forward to reading more of this story.
Thank you & can't wait for the next chapter
oh! please continue with this story i am really excited to see where you are going to go with it :)
Silent Walker (Chapter 8) - Thu 25 Nov 2010
Wow, I just have one thing. WHY IS KAGOME SUBMITTING SO EASILY? It seams a bit out of character. Are you using the "sit" necklace? When is the first battle going to happen? That should be fun. So far so good, besides what was mentioned before.
Fluffy (Chapter 8) - Wed 24 Nov 2010
its awesome cant wait for the next chapter :)
faby (Chapter 7) - Sat 31 Jul 2010
i liked it
tiana (Chapter 7) - Thu 29 Jul 2010
omg thiz iz my first time reading it and i think thiz iz a rlly gud story and i encourage u to keep on writing these chapters when u hav time i rlly enjoyed thiz chpt update soon plz
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