So..... you really left this story on THIS note? That's so cruel!!!! LOL! Damn girl, show a lil' love to your readers! Haha! Oohhhhh I really hope you come back to finish it. So many questions! More than I could possibly list!
I so, the only thing I have to say about this chapter is that it kind of reads inconsistently with what you said in earlier chapters? Before, you wrote that Kagome had read the letters but didn't really understand the meaning behind them as a child, until now. And it wasn't until now that she realized that Kikyo was her half sister when she was at the castle with the king, who was discussing how he eyes reminded him of one of the 4 heroes (who happened to be her father). This reads like Kagome is saying she figured it all out as a child? Sorry, just a little confused. I could be misunderstanding.
Carlyn (Chapter 20) - Tue 30 Jun 2020
Oh wow... Sesshomaru to the rescue!
Carlyn (Chapter 18) - Tue 30 Jun 2020
Interesting...
P.s. I saw a comment that suggested you haven't finished this story. I'm so disappointed! I really hope you come back and finish this! It's really good!
Carlyn (Chapter 17) - Tue 30 Jun 2020
That was INTENSE!
Carlyn (Chapter 16) - Tue 30 Jun 2020
OMG i can't wait for Sesshomaru to find out. Lol
Carlyn (Chapter 15) - Tue 30 Jun 2020
Damn Kagome is COLD HEARTED AF in this story. But i like it! I'm very curious as to where this story is headed. I honestly don't have a clue. For the first time in a long time, i don't have so much as a guess. I thought I was reading a sesskag romance, but now I'm not so sure. What is happening??? I'm exited to find out. Lol
Carlyn (Chapter 2) - Mon 29 Jun 2020
Damn. I'm not normally a fan of this character perspective, but I have to admit I'm hooked right now.
Angel (Chapter 34) - Mon 25 Apr 2016
please update dying to know the end
Pleaseee.. continueeeeeeeeee... you really left HUGE cliffy here
Jen (Chapter 32) - Thu 31 Dec 2015
Please update. I just found this story randomly and it's killing me. Literally killing me that this story has been left behind since 2012. Don't do this to me
Nelly (Chapter 34) - Fri 09 Jan 2015
I know it's been such a long time, but I've been holding out hope that you would still update this story! Its seriously one of my favorites!! Hope to heard from you soon!!!
Great story, keep it coming.
Thank-you for uploading and welcome back! Chapter was ahhhhmazing, as usual.
I wonder where you would take the story next. There's so many separate parts and conflicts within the story, I don't know how you do it. What with Kagome's deception to Inuyasha and the crew, Sesshoumarumaking her "grow soft", Naruku's unknown plans, tree ally cannot wait! Keep up the great work!
Again, thanks for creating such a thrilling story! You're awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter!
*i really really hope that kaqs wont kill sesh. cause i knw in his odd lil' way, he cares for her. .
please dont abandon this story. its such a qood fic to be wasted away.
any sesh and kaqs moment anytime soon?
ideas. mmhmm. . where they will set upcamp and prolly the 3 monks tell em what happened while kagome sneaks away to do someplannnq or whatever. . up to you:)
keep up the qood work*
Just read all of your current chapters today, delightfully twisted and malicious! You paint the story so well, it moves through my mind as if it were a movie. The amazing detail put into the emotions has my face enacting them as if they were my own while simultaneously mouthing Kagome's speeches of justified rage, seething with spite and vengeance. Looking forward to more!
Irihi-Chan (Chapter 32) - Sun 13 Nov 2011
You're aaaaaahhhhhmazing.
Please update!
I love you<3
I liked the chapter, it wasn't exactly what I was expecting (a healthy old man and she confronting him)...... it was better =) I always thought that she'll 'change her mind' when she comes to him and leave him alive... that'd have been anticlimatic. This was so much better.
And finally, we get to see some concrete plans for Kikyo. I gotta wonder tho, will she kill Kikyo? And what about Kik's mother?
You wrote her anger, no fury, 'beautifully'. It struck home, I was soooo mad at him too.
~lily
Yeeeikes! I DO NOT want to piss her off! I loved the angst in this one. It made me hate her father as much as she does!
OMG this story is AMAZING!! I have been staying up to all kinds of ridiculous hours to read it! I can't wait to see more!!!
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