Oh you are evil...So ,if they are even now .Does that mean they won't be seeing each other any more ?
The only problem with that is with her sis & his bro together aren't they going to have some embarassing or uncomfortable situations in the future ? I hope you decide to add to this because they both seemed to be so drawn to each other. I can only imagine how long they will both be thinking & yearning for each other...It was as if physically they were extremely compatible & that they could not get enough of each other.
The 1st time they met, from what it said in the story,Kagome & Sango were driving when Sango accidentally spilled her hot coffee on Kagome's lap while she was driving & it happened so suddenly that Kagome briefly lost control of the car & had been lucky enough not to have hit another car or had an accident & Kagome had been able to regain control of the car & had either pulled into the median,on to the shoulder or the side of the road after & if Sessh had actually seen what had happened,when it had happened, then he had to know it wasn't intentional & something sudden must've happened, either within the car,to the driver or to the car itself.
Yet, when Sessh pulled up to them, rolled down his window ,he immediatelly said something rude to them & then pulled away. They already had the car off & had been sitting in the car getting their bearings back for quite a while by the time Sessh pulled up. So long,in fact, that I doubt Sessh could have seen what had happened,unless he turned around after he saw it happen & went back.
It's funny that his attraction to her started when she walked out of the bathroom,(he in all his selfish glory decided to tell her she shouldn't have taken so long as others need the bathroom) took one look at him,told him off...something about removing whatever was up his ass or putting her foot up there(??) & then she walked away without looking back....
I just realized I read the 1st part on spark & I just reread it on here & it's different.
Anyway I must say this was great how in the 1st one she left him asleep & snuck out when they were done having sex & the 2nd time he showed up at her house ,they had sex & he snuck out while she was sleeping leaving a note saying that now they were even.
Biatorisu (Chapter 3) - Fri 13 Aug 2010
I loved the part of the broked pool table!! I liked how you mixed the emotions!!
Aki (Chapter 3) - Mon 01 Feb 2010
Haha.
I like the ending, it was really funny.
Please make another sequel.
Your awesome.
I'm hoping flattery works with you. xD
Blu (Chapter 3) - Mon 18 Jan 2010
just checking for an update
(Chapter 1) - Wed 18 Nov 2009
I'm working on it, trust me I've just been getting dead ends though. When I get a sudden burst of information, I will post it, please bear with me.
BluMystique (Chapter 3) - Thu 12 Nov 2009
so ummmmm it's been a few months....update please?????
Blu (Chapter 3) - Wed 30 Sep 2009
I just discovered your story and man or man do I LOVE IT. I'm hoping you get to update it sometime soon.
scarletwitchextreme (Chapter 3) - Thu 27 Aug 2009
oh plz continue the second chapter had my knees trembling...lol I want more, please give me more
Ashley (Chapter 3) - Mon 17 Aug 2009
Please write another chapter! This is amazing!
Miss.Undo (Chapter 3) - Fri 24 Jul 2009
Awsome. that was perfect, please do adfd another hell make it a story iff you must. hope you update soon ")
i loved it! definitely HOT!
loveless (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Jul 2009
Oh My God! That was sooo HOT! Angry sex makes for some interesting stuff. I am so glad that you did a sequel. Love, love, love it. You did my hentai heart good. Please update soon.
O_O
i
demand
you
write
more!
now!
- r0o
ps.
LOVED THIS!!!
Amazing! Yes angry sex is the best and both of them sure showed why! I agree with everyone else...I would love to see a sequel to this to see how pissed he is when he wakes up alone and I look forward to seeing the group of angry oneshots. I think it's a great idea and one with many interesting possibilities. Can't wait to see what you do with it.
nita (Chapter 2) - Wed 10 Sep 2008
I love your storys and i just love reading them i wish i was half as talented. hope you can update soon untill then.
haha i think its an amazing idea. im sure we, as readers could give you a lot of ideas!
Nobody (Chapter 2) - Wed 10 Sep 2008
please continue. I'd send you my muse but i can't find her
Yes! *does the dance of the gleeful* I am so glad you're going to post a chapter further and I look forward to seeing the group of angry oneshots. I think it's a great idea and one with many interesting possibilities. Can't wait to see what you do with it.
sugar0o (Chapter 2) - Sun 03 Aug 2008
i think angry sex sequels are completely worth it. there are tons of opportunities.
yes yes yes yes ! please write the sequel AND the angry oneshots ! I'll definitely be reading them!
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