It is very sweet.
I also feel very weary of Inuyasha's indecisiveness. Make up your own mind, boy, and leave Kagome alone; she needs a man (or male) for herself, not you.
Although, I hope there's more interaction of this couple that led Sesshomaru to be interested in Kagome and vice versa. I mean... it seems that her realization is very abrupt in my opinion.Well. At least, this story makes me smiling and happy to read it.
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You incorporated the song "Angel" very well into your story. The lyrics were so sweet I looked for the song. I enjoyed reading your portrayal on Sesshomaru. I think you've done well. The way you focused on his thoughts also helped when he met with Kagome in the last scene. But, I have to say that I was shocked to see Kagome declare her love interest to him.
I had to chuckle when Kagome thought Sesshomaru was the Angel of death. Hehe, she is correct...sort of. Anyways, this story was well written! Good job!
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