Sesshomaru wishes to know his mysterious admirer and I wish to know how (and when) their meeting will be...
Aaaw, Kags is too shy and uncertain! I wonder who broke her self-esteem, or if she ever had a high one in the first place?
Koga, you're in deep, deep s**t now. You should know better than to go and read a letter meant for another, especially when that "other" is daiyokai, or more specifically, Sesshomaru. Be glad if you get out of it alive.
I guess that Koga finding and reading the letter first will be used as a story hook at some point? It'd make such a bittersweet scene, too, where Koga is lauging with his friends about this "secret admirer" Sesshomaru has gained and speculating that she must be stupid and ugly if she can't say those things face to face to him and then Kags all but clams up and hides in her shell and makes Sesshomaru's quest to find her even harder than it already is or something like that -smirk-
See? Your story is wonderful, it has the ability to kick the reader's imaginatio into gear and forward the story in their minds past the chapter that you uploaded, and yet give a surprise and more food for mind when the next chapter comes out <3 I can't wait to read your next update! Great job!
Alpine (Chapter 4) - Tue 20 Jul 2010
Poor Kagome and unrequited love... sigh... I'm sure this will turn out just as I am hoping... Sessy just doesn't know what will hit him.. Thanks again for the refreshing chapter and story, it's stupendous... *Great word, people should use it more often*
i lvoe this story its so sweet and amusing >:3 i want more!
TIANA (Chapter 4) - Mon 19 Jul 2010
LOL I RLLY LOVE THIS STORY ITZ GETTIN GUD KEEP UP THE GUD WORK I CANT WAIT TILL SESSHY KNOWZ THAT ITZ KAGOME
PLZ UPDATE SOON :)
I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it! Please update. :D I feel so greedy asking you to update but.... please forgive me. It is just that good. ^ . ^
-Gabrielle
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