Please update soon. I love this story and I can't wait to find out what happens next. Thank you...

"I think you should find a better ally then someone with honor,"

that sentece doesn't make since. you make it sound like Kagome should fine someone who doesn't have honor. I'm hopeing that you mean that InuYasha doesn't have any honor and that Kagome should fine someone who does have honor.

next chapter please

you need to do grammer checking. Some of your paragraphs are a little long. but beyound that the story is nice.

Dear TrueLoverKagome, I am completely in love with your story so far! I love the fact that Kagome is a Demon, although the goddess part is a new spin on things I enjoy it. I am also really looking forward to seeing Noriko train Shippo and some brotherly bonding going on between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru. I was also wondering what Hoshi looked like exactly, I know that he is black with a white star on his head but what does his body look like; I mean what type of dog is he. Are his ears down or pointed and is his tail bushy, and straight or curled? I was also wonder if Inuyasha would be given any new clothes for formal wear and things like that and if his everyday wear, Firerat Robs, would be added on to so that he would maybe look something like this: http://www.deviantart.com/art/Commission-Daiyoukai-Inuyasha-320539486. I hope to hear more from you soon as I am absolutely dying to know what happens next in your story!

next chapter please

I really want to continue reading your story, however the grammatical errors are so bad I can not. Please use your editor in word as it can help you greatly with grammar and spelling!

You need to brush up on your grammer. You should check for grammer errors or have someone you trust that knows how to edit.

Wonderful ending! better than i thought it would end, with the right person getting the girl!

I really really love this story.

that dissapering into black mist is very suspitious it sounds like something naraku would do anyways keep up the great work its a very good story some advise woud be to check your grammar but that is all i hope to read more soon ^_^

I love this story. Please continue. I cant wait to see what happens next.

Just found your story with your lates chapter.  Had to read it thru.  Like your plot.  just need a little help with the sentence structures.  Other than that this is a very good story. 

With each chapter your writing gets better and your story telling gets better.

I can hardly wait to see what comes next in this story.

i !!love!! your story its one of the best i have read!! but sesshy should learn the truth before he hurts kagome more!! i can't wait for you to post another chapter cause this is a awesome story!!!

OMGosh thats funny and sweet, yet ....

WAY TO GO KOGA! MORRE UPDATES!

Great, fantastic story! Kouga is a jerk. Kouga needs a beating. I hope you let Sesshoumaru kick his ass. Kagome needs to tell her father that Sesshoumaru is the one she loves. Kouga is truely a leach. I can't stand men like that. look forward to your next chapter.

I love the story! I hope Sesshoumaru gets jealous......he deserves it. Kouga is still acting the idiot I like how you kepted him character. Hope you update soon. Great job!