Aww...That's so sweet that he's worried about her in her own time. I love their relationship dynamic. Cute, but in a way that isn't OOC.
Very cute, my heart couldn't take the fact that it was the end. Can't wait to read the rest of your stuff
i loved it! the way sesshomaru got all protectie and accusing, was so cute! i think it was really good, and i like how kagome explained what happned and he was angry about it, it was so worth reading! and the kiss at the end was a bonus touch! i really enjoyed reading the story and you did a good job with it. sorry this comment was so short im new to dokuga so....forgive me.
yep, he can dominate any time *sigh*
Flitterbugz (Chapter 1) - Tue 19 Oct 2010
awww i love this! how sweet!
Um...there is more right???RIGHT????????
Rocks (Chapter 1) - Mon 19 Jul 2010
Oh this was such a good one-shot I wish there was more.
Dejaz (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Jul 2010
i can only say one thing: CUTE!!!!!
Are you sure this is complete???? Are you sure that she wasn't lying to Sesshoumaru about how she got the bruises? Are you sure that Inuyasha didn't follow her through the well to argue about her returning home where Sesshoumaru couldn't intervene and he ended up hurting her? Are you sure that after Sesshoumaru and Kagome get to the future, Inuyasha doesn't follow her again to punish her for going home, not realizing that Sesshoumaru is with her??? Are you sure???????
If you are sure, then I will tell you that it is a good story and I enjoyed it thoroughly.
The Lady W (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Jul 2010
Delightful little story. I enjoyed that it was sufficiently stand alone to be a One Shot; however I could easily see how this could become part of an extended series. The silencing kiss was perhaps a little trite, but sweet nonetheless.
A wonderful first submission to Dokuga.
You have to continue this story, please!!!!
Darcy (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Jul 2010
Great first chapter!I can't wait to read more!
Ashley (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 Jul 2010
This oneshot holds a great foundation for a full story......plz...plz..plz consider to make it into a story...its sucha great storyline...
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