Reviews for The Glass Wall by Ruriame

Mysticangeldust (Chapter 1) - Wed 07 Jul 2010

It's absolutely adorable! Implied romance is still very sweet in its own way, and I'm happy you chose to write this in response to my challenge. Well done!


MissTeak (Chapter 1) - Sun 04 Jul 2010

Dear Ruri,

I am speechless, honestly. This little oneshot was perfect, and I enjoyed every bit of it. The progress was fast yet steady, which is the perfect pace for a oneshot, because the writer has to convey so much in a limited number of words. You brought the readers on a very engaging ride, and every single line had the power to captivate the reader. I hung on to every word, feeling the different emotions Kagome was feeling, while wondering just what Sesshoumaru was trying to think. Even though, in the end, he did not provide an explanation for his disappearance, but the way you wrote the reunion was...wow. It was beautiful, and I swear, I got goosebumps from reading it. The last part about him pulling her through the glass wall was just so powerful in its simplicity.

This is very, very good. I can't think of any other adjectives for now, and I hope you write more, because you're just so good at it.

Love,

MissTeak


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