That was so... MEAN! HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE!!!!! I'm gettin my torch.....
WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 12) - Thu 21 Aug 2008
Gah... say it ain't soo... why must you torture me with the evil cliffy! It was getting good too. Please, please update soon. :P
*mans her pitchfork* Damn you and your cliffhangers! Please update soon!
Setsuna-chan (Chapter 12) - Tue 19 Aug 2008
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I need to know if it worked or not!
Lil Kit (Chapter 12) - Mon 18 Aug 2008
Kyaa!!
NOOOO!!! TT^TT
Why tis this chapter end so soon!
Why oh why!
*whimpers* Please update *on knees and begs*
This chapter was really good ^^
I hope to read more!! Thanx for updating this chapter! ^^
::standing with lit torch and twirling subjacation collor around finger:::
Oh Lady Sianna!!
Wonderful chapter but the cliffie is driving me CRAZY!!!!
Update soon or I'll use the collar! ;)
LadySafire
freakygal (Chapter 12) - Mon 18 Aug 2008
too soon! too short! it drive me crazy! T.T but wat a nice chapt.. haha love it..hope u update soon!! thx~
kagomesirene (Chapter 12) - Mon 18 Aug 2008
oh you`re really the devil himself ;) such a cliffy is really mean..but i wonder..is the collar really more powerful than the curse?...and what`s going to happen should someone remove the necklace...is she going to forget everythnig again---so many questions....pleaseeeeeeeeeeee update soon
kagomesirene (Chapter 12) - Mon 18 Aug 2008
oh you`re really the devil himself ;) such a cliffy is really mean..but i wonder..is the collar really more powerful than the curse?...and what`s going to happen should someone remove the necklace...is she going to forget everythnig again---so many questions....pleaseeeeeeeeeeee update soon
L-desu (Chapter 12) - Mon 18 Aug 2008
damn, sessy dipped in the chocolate!! nawtie nawtie.... loved your update, can't wait for the next!
Hello miss. May I introduce you "Demon", otherwise known as "The Cliffie Devourer". Yea, I know, he's still a cutte little puppy, but what can I say, I only created him a few secons ago to write my review... ahem... anyway -puts puppy away for his nap-, good chapter, good story this far. No, I haven't reviewed here, but... well, shame on me, I only read this story now. Good for me though, good fics are hard to find, even more "advanced" ones ^_^
So, lass, very good work. But be careful, my cruel cliffie chaser hell hound will be less lenient next time -pats the small head of the sleeping puppy- Dewa mata XD
No, It can't end now, not there! ;O
It was getting way to good! I hope you update A.S.A.P !!! I can't wait to read more of your amazing story!
Keep it up and please update soon.
Kambri_Jade
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K,T,M (Chapter 12) - Mon 18 Aug 2008
....... dere has to be somthing wrong with my computer, dere is no way da chapter ended like dat, dat has to be da BIGGEST and most annoying cliffie i have EVER seen DX i dink i gonna crt :..( please update soon XD
Ok I just read what you wrote in your story and I love it PLEASE PLEASE have another chapter up soon..
Athemea (Chapter 12) - Mon 18 Aug 2008
Dear Lady Sianna,
I have only recently discovered your piece and I must say, since the first chapter I have been hooked. I did not stop reading all the chapters until I came to this last one. I really enjoy your writing style as it is very easy to follow. Your word choice I must say is very well picked. It puts the reader into the room as an observer and leaves no room for improvement on that end. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
-Athemea
Athemea (Chapter 12) - Mon 18 Aug 2008
Dear Lady Sianna,
I have only recently discovered your piece and I must say, since the first chapter I have been hooked. I did not stop reading all the chapters until I came to this last one. I really enjoy your writing style as it is very easy to follow. Your word choice I must say is very well picked. It puts the reader into the room as an observer and leaves no room for improvement on that end. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
-Athemea
I read your first chapter. It was pretty good. I like how clean and neat your storytelling is. I think though it could benefit from a little more description. Explore all of the senses a bit more. Sounds, smells, textures, tastes. It helps a lot to immerse the reader.
I love this story, and i always get so excited about a new chapter. ^.^ I cant wait for the next one
Oh my..... You stopped there Aww man it was getting good. Well can't do anything about it Thought I wish I could. MMMM can I say GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!! Can you plz put the next one up soon.....PLZZ
Davita (Chapter 12) - Sun 17 Aug 2008
I will hunt you down and tie down in front of the computer and make sure that you finish this story!!! JK
Enjoyed the chapter update soon ;)............or else hehehe
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