First of all, can you please continue this? It's is just pure genius.
Second of all, I love every bit of this story!
I felt a smile forming on my lips the moment I read of Kagome's suspicious behaviors. Then my smile widened as I read Sesshomaru saying how the trio put together means bad business. I was curious, too, to see what Kagome had in store. I couldn't help "Awww"-ing out loud when I read of Sesshomaru's actions with Kagome's daughter. I could just imagine him playing with the little girl. It was just an adorable scene that I found myself re-reading it over and over again.
Okay, now the scene that made me full out laugh was when Sesshomaru was retelling the moment he knew he had fallen in love with Kagome.
"He didn't know when or how it happened, but he did know when he finally realized. While he had been forced to stand still, waiting for a servant to pull her sleeping body off his leg, Sesshoumaru had watched this amazing creature, and found an unknown emotion welling up inside his chest. A few days later, Sesshoumaru, Lord of the West, was forced to admit he had fallen in love with a human miko."
How?
HOW? HOW CAN YOU NOT LAUGH TO THIS? IT IS THE MOST ADORABLE, YET HILARIOUS MOMENT.
This just makes me wonder how they fell in love. I wish you would have written a prequel or something.
This short chapter was so amazing that my heart warmed near the end when Kagome gave him a kiss.
Please consider continuing this masterpiece because I would really love to read more of this.
I truly found a gem!
*chuckles*
This was simply brilliant!
I love how you began writing from Rin's perspective. She was able to paint Kagome's character so beautifully and perfectly. I could instantly connect with the character through this.
Then, reading the toddler's mischeif made me smile the whole time. I thought it was adorable! Sesshomaru's reaction was priceless too! You've managed to pull me into a different world in a matter of one short chapter. I was able to imagine the whole scene so clearly in my mind.
And I love how you wrote a scene on Kagome's daily life with Sesshomaru and her kids. This chapter made me feel all warm inside. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.
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