This is really interesting. I already am interested in Kagome's personality. She sounds so snarky here I can't help but smiling.

Is this 'he' Sesshomaru? Well, boy, get your man up and make a move on the poor girl.

The first chapter really suits the title. I can understand Kagome's teenage life and how she acts through this chapter. It was interesting to read your potrayal of the young Kagome. Anger management issues....that just made me laugh.

There were a few grammar mistakes here and there, but it didn't bother me too much as I read. Other than that, I think you did a good job in writing in Kagome's perspective. I could easily imagine her in her teenage years.