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Yoru-101 (Chapter 8) - Fri 16 Jul 2010

Yeah, I don't like him much either. Damned Inuyasha. >:(

It's kinda sad if you think about it. Most of the people on this site really hate the main character of their favourite series. Oh well, we always have Sesshoumaru <3

MOORRRREEE ANGST and more....praise? I thought I told you to stop doing that. (though I secretly like it :B )

You made up a tribe.....Hmmm.... I am highly amused.

Though it's hard to pronounce >:)

KEEP WORKING HAAARRRRDDDDDD


BlueHeavensAngel (Chapter 8) - Fri 16 Jul 2010

I really love this story despite the depressing parts.  I'm addicted. I can't wait for the next chapter!  Don't apologize for killing off characters.  We know you had a reason.  :)


Yoru-101 (Chapter 7) - Thu 15 Jul 2010

I....

I remember that story.....I think.

Something about it just brings back that childish feeling that I have when I think about my family back on the Reserve. 

You bring home to me. Thank you.

 


Yoru-101 (Chapter 6) - Sun 11 Jul 2010

Wow. That was a surprise.

Really. Violence? You? I never would have guessed you wrote it so well. Wooooow.

I'm impressed. Though now its KILLING ME to find out what actually happened. Seriously. I'm not going to be able to sleep until your next update, so please hurry.

My perfect complexion is counting on you.

UUUGGGHHHHH THAT WAS COOL.


Yoru-101 (Chapter 5) - Wed 07 Jul 2010

AAAAHHHH, so pretty.

You are. Your mind, your soul. Your stories make my heart clench with joy.

The arrival of Souta. I have a little brother just like him. Only he doesn't worship me.

 

You make me happy. You really do.

-Tsyo


Archerdiana (Chapter 5) - Wed 07 Jul 2010

D: Is the storm the british?


Archerdiana (Chapter 4) - Wed 07 Jul 2010

Look, I really, really like this story. It's great that someone has placed a story in the New World bbefore the colonization and it's very important for us to know about our ancesters, but it gets a bit distracting to have to scroll down to know what the sentence means; it cuts te fluidness of the plot.

That doesn't mean you have to stop putting terms in n.a. languages, but maybe you could take some down and leave us with the easy-to-learn ones. The songs, I think, are also great, those are nice to keep and thanks for adding the youtube links!

The setting palpable and your descriptions are very very nice, but try to simplify a bit for us ignorants ;)

   Greetings from aztec lands


Yoru-101 (Chapter 4) - Wed 07 Jul 2010

UUGGGHHHHHH INUYASSHHHHAAAAA

Rude and obnoxious indeed.

BUT SESSHOUMARUUUUUUU

I HAVE NOW SEEN HIM.

AND SUCH I SHALL NOW DRAW.

I have a feeling you did this on purpose, Siki. You just wanted your fanart sooner, didn't you?


Yoru-101 (Chapter 3) - Fri 02 Jul 2010

Oooh, I'm all flustered now.

And yes, the names are right. Another thing I noticed though, Erharr is very similar to the Mohawk word Errha which means dark red. Which reminded me of his fire-rat haori.

All in all, congratulations! That was magnificent. I am so excited and jealous of your talent. I'm going to be drawing you fanarts, m'dear.

Once again, if you need anything, feel free to message me. I'm always here.

~Tsyo


Makuro767 (Chapter 1) - Mon 28 Jun 2010

I remember a fanfiction that consist of a tribal Sesshoumaru and foreigner Kagome somewhere. Interesting plot, but it is unlike you so nothing to worry bout. However, sadly the author has yet to continue their journey. Your story strikes me as wonderful. Can't get a Mohawk Sesshie outta muh head! Keep on the good work and surprises in store for me!


TruGemini (Chapter 2) - Sat 26 Jun 2010

Great story! I am interested to see where this goes. Please update soon.


Yoru-101 (Chapter 2) - Fri 25 Jun 2010

I am so glad someone has finally created an Aboriginal AU

I come from the Mohawk tribe (Kanien'kehake) and this little bit of home brings me great joy.

I have not visited my reserve in a long while, and you have captured the essence beautifully, along with my OTP.

You are very talented, and I applaud you at your accuracy, vocabulary, and general enjoyment.

If I may ask, what tribe are you from?

 

Thanks again <3

 


Sin (Chapter 2) - Fri 25 Jun 2010

I have to say, I was kind of sceptical when I started reading this because it's so different from what I normally read. But guess what? I really like it! This is so different from what most everyone else writes, I like the change of scenery. It's not really developed enough for me to give you anything really helpful other than, it sounds good and please keep going with it! :D


denise (Chapter 2) - Fri 25 Jun 2010
i luv the story so far. please continue with it!

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