Wow, this is a rich tale indeed! I'm very much anticipating the next chapter. Great work.
If the well closes, I hope she's pregnant so she can keep a part of him with her. If she does have his child, I bet he will be one surprised daiyoukai when they eventually meet in her time. But will he have a mate and several grown pups already? Your first chapter has got me all excited with all the possibilities and different directions this story could go.
ghost_youkai (Chapter 1) - Mon 14 Jun 2010
This story was truly touching and beautiful. I hope to see this story progress later as the day continue ^_^
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