I like it! Kind of reminds me of a Dr. Who episode. I eagerly wait for the next chapter.
argh! cliffy! nooooo!
i love how kouga makes her just spaz out. is he going to follow her like a lost puppy now? heh heh. that would be amusing.
i wondering who the bad guy is and why kagome is tweaking. when are the older versions of the them going to make an appearance again.
wow, i just realized you have to keep track to three kagomes and two seshomarus. good luck with that!
me
Gotta love Kouga! Boy ain't right in any timeline. :P
Now let's discuss this little cliff you left us standing at.... We have to know what happens! Please update soon, or many of us will pout. -_-'
Love the story!
Ah, and the wolf appears. Went back through and reread it all to this point. Love this story and can't wait to see where you take it.
Lillian (Chapter 15) - Mon 25 Apr 2011
Bahahahha and Kouga's shown up! Mrawr! The hunt is on. This is so interesting! There are now THREE sets of Kagome/Sesshomarus. No, wait. There are two Sesshomarus and three Kagomes. Goodness. My head is spinning.
Nicely done! Can't wait for the next installment. I mean, I can. Oh, never mind.
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Good story. HeHe... Sess is so nosey.
Can't wait to see where this goes!
Wonderful story, I can't wait to see what happens next.
| yay! another chapter! sweet. loved it, cant wait for the next chapter! :)
Hesunohana (Chapter 6) - Fri 06 Aug 2010
pff ! so much of a cliffhanger ! I thought he will never believe her...
good luck for your school !
Hesunohana (Chapter 5) - Wed 04 Aug 2010
good fiction ! I wonder what will happen next.
our favorite Keeper's information are a bit complicated but I think it's partially because he doesn't tell everything.
so, see you soon for the next update !
| yay! new chapter! i can't wait to see what happens next!
Nice start and intriguing storyline! I look forward to seeing where this will go!
nanashitenshi (Chapter 4) - Sun 11 Jul 2010
| Oooo, yay, another great chapter! Still love the story, and the confusion trying to think about the time overlap. But I like this story enough to review on my phone, which is a pain. Keep up the good work!
nanashitenshi (Chapter 3) - Sun 27 Jun 2010
| I just wanted to let you know, love the story! Keep up the good work. love the idea. :)
Indigo_miko (Chapter 3) - Sun 27 Jun 2010
That was an interesting chapter. It just raises more questions in my head. I wonder, will Kagome meet Sesshomaru in the past? If she does, will he remember her when she originally falls down the well and meets him? Time travel always causes my brain to knot. Keep writing. I can't wait for the next chapter.
At first i was a bit leary about reading a first person point of view story because so many people mess them up. However, I think you are doing a very good job so far. You have me hooked and I am eagerly awaiting more. ^.^
hola (Chapter 1) - Tue 15 Jun 2010
| wow! excellent start! it's nice to see a story with first person perspective. i dont see that much on here.. anyways, i'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
xokaggyfanox (Chapter 1) - Sun 13 Jun 2010
words can't describe how much i love this story. so far it is really good i can't wait to read more.
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