Great chapter. I'm curious to see how or if this changes their future. Please continue and thanks for writing.
It's another good chapter. Just one part was a bit confusing, Rin was confronted by the villagers while fishing then the next paragraph she's being chased by wolves. Threw me off for a moment.
Can't wait for more though!
Haven (Chapter 36) - Wed 12 Sep 2012
Wow, I just discovered this story and now I'm obsessed. I love non-linear temporal paradoxes - hard to keep up with at first but you do a good job of keeping it clear. You must continue and please update sooner. EPICNESS!!!
Some might find that utterly confusing... and yet as truly confused as I can get over much simpler things I feel quite comfortable with the explanation of where all the versions of Kagome and Sesshomaru are as well as the intricacies of the currently convoluted timeline. LOVE it!
... my brother may actually be correct when he says there's something wrong with me. :laughs:
Thanks so much for writing!
...I swore I'd never let myself get caught in one of these godforsaken paradoxes - the future is the past, the past is the future, it all gives me a headache.
-Captain Janeway, Star Trek Voyager
And Kagome's mom is relating. :P Great story. Looking forward to more.
... and this is where it gets Complicated... ^_^
As if it wasn't complicated before. :) Gotta love time-travel.
Thanks for writing!
Lillian (Chapter 31) - Fri 02 Sep 2011
Oh excellent! Plot advancement!
Lillian (Chapter 30) - Thu 01 Sep 2011
Oh ho ho ho! Someone has a bite.
Lillian (Chapter 29) - Tue 30 Aug 2011
I don't remember if I've reviewed yet for your story, but I follow this! I loved it a lot. It's so interesting and is quite an original take with just a dash of the usual.
Cute!
update soon ppppppppppppplllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
ruhiko (Chapter 27) - Sun 31 Jul 2011
Ah~ poor Kagome~! ^O^ LOVE IT~~!!!!!
Page 1 of 2
| | | | | | | | | |