You do know that Sango is only sixteen, do you? When you write older girl it sounds much older than Kagome although there is only one year between them.

What I wish for Kagome here is that she has a backbone. I´m really tired of fics where all she does is cry and let´s Inuyasha walk all over her. That´s so not Kagome. True, she is young and thanks to Kikyou insecure but she needs to stay true to herself and should know that Kikyou is not perfect. On the contrary, Kikyou was trained to be a miko since she was very young but a mere hanyou deceived her and cut her down. And she is an emotional cripple and a cold fish. I don´t hate Kikyou but she seriously lacks a character and is really arrogant for a girl who has a clay body. Her arrogance really gets on my nerves.

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This is hilarious xD

"Would you like to be more beautiful than this Kikyou. There are curses that can make her wither into-"

That particular line really made me laugh, 10min non-stop. I love your witch character ^^ Can you name her? XD