I LOVE IT. I LOVE YOU. FFFF you're such a great writer. D: ;; Your plots are amazing and this one no-less so. I also really like how you incorporated Shiori and the way the flow of your story doesn't reveal anything until you intend it to be. I'm very proud and grateful for you allowed me the chance to beta this masterpiece. I can already see the lemon in my mind KUKUKU.
Also I'd like to mention that your story was really good even before I suggested the tweaks. ... and that I very much look forward to your future works. /bow
Fic and author definitely faved. C;
GOD THE MAN MEAT IS STILL DISTRACTING ME LOLOOLFDSGAFDSGdfgfhfghfd.
/flashesyou.
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