The story was GREAT but the ending kinda ruined it for me. It came out of nowere! and i got so disoriented :P thats my only criticism it was really good, if not a little fast but the ending SPED with sesshomaru's speed at me at the end other that that it's GREAT and i completely understand the nimination! ^_^
GOOD LUCK!!! ^_^
Oh. My. Gosh!!I am sittin here balling my eyes out! I feel like I lost a friend and I think it is amazing how you got me to feel like a part of the story (emotenly anyways). The way you wrote it was very sad but you made it wonderful. most stories have a happily ever after and some times even with a sad ending it's refreshing to read a story like this. Thank you for sharing it with every one :)
Sylvie (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Jun 2010
I think that was one of the sadest stories I have ever read, but also one of my favorites. You are a wonderful writer.
I loved it.
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