Very nice drabbles. My favorite was Rain. Very well done! I will be looking forward to more of your work in the future.
I really appreciated that you kept proper writing format with your drabbles, rather than letting them turn into big chunks of unedited texts (I have the tendancy to do this with mine. BAD mikki!) Trinkle and Mist were probably my two faves. You write lovely! I look forward to seeing any expansions.
These were good...really good. I especially loved Mist, Drop and Rain....^-^ I loved it how you wrote that Shippou had pretty much been foolin' all lol. I really liked how you pieced together your drabbles and I want to read more of them now! lol
Keep up the good work!
Wow, I don't know which one I like best so I'll just choose them all. I love the one you ended on, I'm such a sucker for a romantic ending. The two with Inuyasha and his mental powers were awesome. It's weird thinking of him being a little sadistic , (the part of him laughing as the power flashed in his eyes)cooolll. The one with Shippo was so cute. I think Sesshomaru better get used to the idea of Rin being married to a youkai in the future. Read your note at the end I can't wait to see which ones you extend. Great job on all of them.
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Sat 06 Nov 2010
Very nice drabbles. Trinkle and Mist are my favorites. I notcied in your AN that you do plan on expanding some of those, if you happen to add more to either of those drabbles can you please let me know? I would love to read what comes next :).
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