It's me again. :3 I should probably make an account... But to the point. Please, no rape! D: It always ruins stories for me. :( I do NOT want this story to be ruined, because I love it so. It's so cute but so serious. Please, update as soon as possible! I don't mean to rush you, but I just can't wait! xD
kukuro (Chapter 7) - Thu 03 Jun 2010
please update soon ^^
Im so curious right now XD
[curiousity killed da kat] ._.
Anyway... LOVE THE CHAPTER!!!
Sophie (Chapter 7) - Wed 02 Jun 2010
I like the way the story goes. I just hope there won't be rape here, really there was so many stories with it. Why none can spare Kagome from that fate? Anyway I really enjoy this chapter and will be waiting for the next one!
The story is interesting and I've been enjoying it. But I think Dokuga has rules against replying to reviewers in Authors Notes. You may want to check into that before they give you flack over it. Also, watch out for font sizes. The end a/n on this chapter was written in font so small I could barely read it.
The story itself is cute though. I can't wait to see what happens next.
I hope Sesshomaru can get to her before Naraku has her!
kukuro (Chapter 6) - Tue 01 Jun 2010
not signed in right now, surpreme lagginess.
anyway, awesome chapter! update as soon as possible ^^
btw you should describe more what sesshomaru was thnking or felt or [emotion in voice] on the last line.
Thanks for the silver star! xD Damn, I didn't think Sesshomaru would just let her be taken. *tear*
katlady (Chapter 6) - Tue 01 Jun 2010
omg how sad.. i think Sesshoumaru is up to somthing though great update domo for the star XD
I'm guessing that it's Inuyasha who interrupted that intimate moment. Since it seems like just the thing he'd do. Does anyone at the Western Palace know of Kagome's origins? And how will things change once her secret is out? Keep up the good work and update soon :P
mikochild (Chapter 5) - Sat 29 May 2010
write more please it is truley amazing!!
Again, this is pure awesome-ness. XD!!
I say, Lord Higurashi or Ayame.
katlady (Chapter 5) - Fri 28 May 2010
okay here are my guesses
Ayame cause shes being such a bitch
Sesshoumarus mother..if shes alive
Naraku casue well hes ever were
Koga...cause you have yet to mention him and kagome is "his woman" in the anime
inuyasha...cause he felt like following his brother
you'll find away to twist it some how good update though
Thanks for explaining why Kagome was sent away. But where did the Northern Kingdom obtain such power to drive away the demons? And I wondering how things would have been different if the Northern King had been told of Kagome's birth? Also, when Kagome was in the field, I sorta had a picture of her and Sesshou making flower wreaths then putting them on and skipping through the valley. A random thought but it's sort of funny. Keep up the good work and update soon. :P
Amy (Chapter 4) - Wed 26 May 2010
MORE UPDATES.
Chapter 4 is also awesome. ^^
-speechless-
Keep it going!! ^-^
Kate! (Chapter 4) - Tue 25 May 2010
I'd just like to say, that I absolutely LOVE this story! (: Right now, it is in my top three. The other two are Wisteria and Unspoiled. :3 And when Sesshomaru smiled at her, it was awesome. I like the fact that he isn't COMPLETELY shut off in this story. It's refreshing to see a story where he has a little fun and acts a little childish(dying INuyasha's clothes pink). I like it a lot. Please, update whenever you get a chance!
Mimiru (Chapter 4) - Tue 25 May 2010
Oooooo I'm rather enjoying this story very, very, very much :) I eagerly await the next chapter ^^
I really love this fic so far. Especially the song that Kagome sings... Could you send me a copy of it? I would really like to read the entire thing. Also, could you go into more detail about having no girls in the Northern Kingdom's family? Or give more background info about how Kagome was raised? Keep up the good work and update soon :P
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